allibaz91 Posted October 22, 2006 Report Share Posted October 22, 2006 Lol woot coolio part Shan!! Update soon xx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
>>Emma<< Posted October 22, 2006 Report Share Posted October 22, 2006 This is really good, I really like the way you write it, can't wait to see what happens, update ASAP Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SfanS Posted October 23, 2006 Report Share Posted October 23, 2006 I loved that chapter! hehehe, you're in lurve Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
swfc Posted October 23, 2006 Report Share Posted October 23, 2006 Great chapter. Please, whatever you do, don't tell me that Baily will be in love with Drew. Either that or I've read it wrongly or am just plain blind. Great chapter. Update soon, guys. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xsophiexlouisex Posted October 23, 2006 Report Share Posted October 23, 2006 Heya Guys, it's me Sophie! I havent been on bttb for ages, but anyways i write for Lauren Glad people like it! Loadsa Luv Soph x Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Traceve Posted October 24, 2006 Report Share Posted October 24, 2006 Lauren’s POV (Soph’s) I woke up to the horrible sight of those green walls, totally disgusting! “That’s the last thing I wanna see when I wake up in the morning,” I moaned to myself as I stretched and slowly got out of bed. I walked out of my bedroom and towards the bathroom, I needed to have a shower before I did anything else that morning. After I’d had my shower, got dressed in my tracksuit and walked across to Baily’s room, I was quite shocked to see her sitting up and drawing, “Seriously Bail, we’ve only been here a night and your already drawing!” I laughed, “And where are you going?” She asked suspiciously. “Um…to the gym…if there is one…” I said shyly realising what Baily was doing, “See!” She exclaimed. “Don’t talk about me! It’s 10am and your already up and ready to work out!” She giggled. “Yeh…But that’s totally different!” I said poking my tongue out at her. “You fancy coming?” I asked her. “Uh…let me think about that…I could lie in my bed, drawing or go to the gym and work out…I think I’ll stay here thanks!” She laughed, I couldn’t help but join in. “GIRLS! Please! Some of us are still trying to sleep!” Our mum shouted from the next room. “Sorry!” I shouted back, looking at Baily who was trying hard to keep back the laughter. “See what you do to me! I’m going to work out…” I whispered. I finally arrived at the local gym about 45 minutes later, I couldn’t believe I had gotten lost, trust me! I walked into the gym, it was called ‘SB’, I walked across to the counter and tapped on the boy behind the counter, “Hey, I’m new and I’d like to join…” I said as the boy turned around, OMG! It was Lucas! I could feel embarrassment jolt all over me, “Uh, hey…Lauren right?” He asked me with a cute smile, “yeh, how come you’re here?” I asked him sweetly. “I work here actually…” He replied. “So do you want me to help you? It is your first time and everything…” he asked me. “yeh, that would be cool thanks!” I smiled. After about an hour, my time was up, “Thanks so much, you were a massive help!” I said looking at him, he was so hot! I had to go home and tell Baily everything. “It’s cool…anytime,” He replied. Just as I was about to add something, the cute boy that myself and baily saw yesterday with the dark curls walked in, “Hey Drew!” Lucas said to him. Drew eh? I had to inform Baily with all the new info I found out, “Fancy a party tonight?” Lucas asked after he came back from talking to ‘Drew’. “yeh sure, is it alright for my sister Baily to come too?” I asked. “Yeh! Totally!” He replied. “Ok, see you later then!” I smiled sweetly. I ran out the door, Baily would be totally proud of me, my first day here and I’d already bagged us a place at a party with two cute guys! Loadsa Luv Soph, Shan x Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Rosey~ Posted October 24, 2006 Report Share Posted October 24, 2006 Yay update =] That was really good. Kepp it upp! xxx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SfanS Posted October 24, 2006 Report Share Posted October 24, 2006 Another fantastic chapter....Update soon! Hey, did you choose who you'd actually want to be with for you part? Just wondering.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Traceve Posted October 24, 2006 Report Share Posted October 24, 2006 Hey, did you choose who you'd actually want to be with for you part? Just wondering.... We choose who we wanted to be Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
swfc Posted October 25, 2006 Report Share Posted October 25, 2006 I was right! Bails is in love with Drew... No surprises there. Great update guys. Love it heaps. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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