irish_angel Posted October 20, 2006 Report Share Posted October 20, 2006 Great start. Look forward to reading more really soon Oh god please tell me thats Jack. I'll give you a cookie if its Jack. I'll cry if its not Jack. Please be Jack. Great start though Please udpate sooN D: I'll give you some cookies aswell Please post more soon. And i'll buy you a whole cookie factory if you let Jack be alive Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Laura- Posted October 23, 2006 Report Share Posted October 23, 2006 The first chapter was good! Cant wait to read more! Please update soon! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
>>Emma<< Posted October 24, 2006 Report Share Posted October 24, 2006 That was really good, are you planning on continuing with this fic? I really hope so, please update asap! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
*belle* Posted October 24, 2006 Report Share Posted October 24, 2006 That was great! Hehe I'll give you more than cookies if it's Jack. How does a tenna sound lol! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xxgulcanxx Posted October 24, 2006 Report Share Posted October 24, 2006 That was an awesome chapter, please let it be Jack update soon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Angel~ Posted October 24, 2006 Report Share Posted October 24, 2006 Please let it be Jack! Hope you're planning on updating soon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jessie Posted October 29, 2006 Report Share Posted October 29, 2006 Here guys, sorry It took so long! THANKS FOR ALL THE COOKIES hahahahaha Chapter 2 Martha was staring at the man accross the street. It wasn't untill she realised that she was standing in the middle of the road that she thought she should move. But she was so captivated by the mystery of the man that she couldn't bring herself to move. She even failed to hear the car coming her way! ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- The man saw the car....he saw it coming closer and closer...and closer....why wasn't she moving. Why is she just staring at me? He thought He had to do something. The speeding car came around the corner. The man sprinted for her. He noticed the frightened look on her face as he dove on her and cleared her from harms way. ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Martha opened her eyes to see the mystery man looking down at her. He reminded her so much of Jack. His muscles, his shape, his smell. She was convinced it was him. "Jack??" said Martha He was just about to say something "OMG MARTHA ARE YOU OKAY?" Martha saw Tasha running over to her. The mystery man got up and ran before she could see or say anything to him. Who was he? Martha felt dizzy. She told Tash that she felt sick and she went up to her apartment. Maybe she was waiting for him? She needed to know If it was Jack, and if it wasn't who was it? NEXT CHAPTER ~ A glimpse of the man Note: I know its short but I have to get off the computer Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tasha Posted October 29, 2006 Report Share Posted October 29, 2006 Jaaaaaaaaaaack!! It has to be Jack, the title of the fan fic says it all, it must be him *yaaaay* Cant wait for more Please update soon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-ParaisGal- Posted October 29, 2006 Report Share Posted October 29, 2006 Please let it be Jack! Please, please, please, please! Hehe, I give you a cookie if it's Jack *Decides, holding out the sacred cookie* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
>>Emma<< Posted October 29, 2006 Report Share Posted October 29, 2006 Yayyyyyyyyyyyyy you updated and it was worth the wait! Brilliant chapter, please don't leave it too long before you next update! Looking forward to it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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