Lilone Posted October 12, 2006 Report Posted October 12, 2006 Topic Title – Hard Situations! Topic Description – This fic contains quite a few character as it's such a long fic. Here are some that have a pretty big role through out: Dan, Sally, Amanda, Claire Broody, Drew. Type of story: long fiction Rating: (A) Main Characters: Peter Baker Genre: A mixture Warnings: Violence, sexual content Is Story being proof read: Yes Summary: Peter Baker returns to Summer Bay with a pain killer addiction, he finds romance as he kicks the addiction but things change when the town starts to turn against him. Different relationships start to make Petes love life differcult. Many People from the past start to return in Peters life but with murders, mysterious and dark secrets, It's just the begining of the Hard Situations for Peter Baker...... Here is mine and swfc fan fic, let us know what you think of this teaser As he walked slowly down stairs towards his jacket, a sense of guilt started to wash over him about taking the tablets when he knew he should have stopped taking them last month. He reached inside the jacket pocket and pulled out a container with white pills in it. He opened the container and titled it so that one tablet would fall into his hands. Even though Peter felt guilty, he couldn’t make himself stop. He was warned by his doctors that he was only supposed to take those pills for a particular amount of time. Once it was over, he was supposed to take it in situations of emergence. ‘Well, this is one of them,’ he thought to himself. What with having to deal with Drew and Dan and the rest of the town being shocked over his sudden return. He dreaded his parent’s reaction when they found out. ‘Then again, if they find out.’ he slowly thought to himself as he placed a tablet into his mouth and gulped down a glass of water. Enjoy Do we write more?
tasha7905 Posted October 12, 2006 Report Posted October 12, 2006 Sounds good so far. I would like to see where it goes, so yea write more please.
Traceve Posted October 12, 2006 Report Posted October 12, 2006 That is an awesome start..Wonder what pills Peter is taking? Please do continue this fic, I cant wait!! Two great authors, doing one fic, makes one darn awesome fic
Oxidizer Posted October 12, 2006 Report Posted October 12, 2006 A wicked fic by two of my favorite writers - YAY! Can't wait!
Lilone Posted October 12, 2006 Report Posted October 12, 2006 A wicked fic by two of my favorite writers - YAY! Can't wait! *starts to go red* Another lil teaser She dropped her duster and started screaming. Not before Peter had heard her say “Oh, my god, detective!” I wonder who that is Proper chapter up within the hour
QUIET ACHIEVER Posted October 12, 2006 Report Posted October 12, 2006 Looks like the beginning of a wonderful Peter fan fic! It's got me intrigued now... please continue the fic. Love to see where you'll take us on this glorious journey. She dropped her duster and started screaming. Not before Peter had heard her say “Oh, my god, detective!” I wonder who that is Now that's gotta be Colleen....
Lilone Posted October 12, 2006 Report Posted October 12, 2006 As Peter woke up lying in Amanda’s bed he slowly started to think about the night before, how special it was to him. As he happily turned around to face Amanda, she was not there. So he decided to walk down stairs and look for her. It was a bit strange for Peter as he had only just come back to Summer Bay three days ago. But, he was happy that Amanda was getting him to resolve issues that needed to be sorted, such as Dan and Drew and his addiction. Whilst walking down the stairs, he only just realized that he was wearing nothing but his white boxers. He couldn’t be bothered putting a shirt on, thinking, ‘Not like she has not seen it and me in it before,’ with a slight smile gracing his face. He reached the kitchen and saw Amanda standing by the stove, wearing her bathrobe, causing him to ponder as to what was under it. Peter heard Amanda singing along to the radio, which was on low and he could hear what she was singing clearly. As he walked further into the kitchen, he noticed her swaying around as she cooked breakfast. Pete took this chance to swing his arms round her waist kissing her neck and said, “Hey beautiful.” Amanda placed the spoon that she was using on the work top and turned to face Pete. She kissed him passionately on the lips, and then placing her hand on his firm right bum cheek, she squeezed it making Pete pull away from the kiss giggling at her. ‘You are such a tease’ he said as he moved her hair from her neck and very slowly, started kissing her.As Pete lifted Amanda on to the work surface kissing her more and more passionately he was stopped by the noise of the oven bleeping. ‘Leave it’ said Peter as he tried to keep Amanda close to him. ‘Peter! stop being a naughty boy. I need food to keep my strength up if you want extras.’ Amanda grinned as she saw Pete’s smile begin to grow. Amanda placed Pete’s breakfast on the table and sat down opposite him and watched him eat it slowly. Every time Pete ate a bit of his breakfast he would look up at Amanda grinning at her. Pete was half way through his breakfast when he stopped eating, stood up and grabbed his plate as well as Amanda and placed them next to the sink. ‘I was eating that!’ said a stunned Amanda. Peter took her by her hand and pulled her up. As he pulled her up, he lifted her into his arms and started to walk up the stairs. He took her into the bedroom where they started making out, even before Amanda could start to take Pete’s boxers off. Amanda turned around looking at Pete while he was sleeping. She was amazed that he was even anywhere near her after all the heartache they had caused in L.A. As Amanda slowly put her fingers through his hair, he opened his eyes and grinned at her. Pete looked at the clock in front of him and thought ‘S*** I have got to take the pills.’ ‘I’ll be right back babe. I need a drink’ Peter said as he picked up his boxers and started to put them on before leaving the bedroom and headed towards the kitchen. As he walked slowly down stairs towards his jacket, a sense of guilt started to wash over him about taking the tablets when he knew he should have stopped taking them last month. He reached inside the jacket pocket and pulled out a container with white pills in it. He opened the container and titled it so that one tablet would fall into his hands. Even though Peter felt guilty, he couldn’t make himself stop. He was warned by his doctors that he was only supposed to take those pills for a particular amount of time. Once it was over, he was supposed to take it in situations of emergence. ‘Well, this is one of them,’ he thought to himself. What with having to deal with Drew and Dan and the rest of the town being shocked over his sudden return. He dreaded his parent’s reaction when they found out. ‘Then again, if they find out.’ he slowly thought to himself as he placed a tablet into his mouth and gulped down a glass of water. Flashback: After Peter had whisked Amanda off to the bedroom, Colleen Smart had entered to start her daily cleaning of Amanda’s mansion. She headed towards the kitchen and saw two plates, still with food on it in the sink. She tutted and muttered to herself, ‘What a waste of food. Why, if she only knew how valuable food was. And her guest as well. Thank goodness I thought my Lancie not to waste food.” She went along muttering and cleaning and occasionally, the words, “Wait til Madge hears about this” could be heard. When she was done, she headed towards the closet to get the duster and didn’t hear someone come down and head towards the kitchen. After finding the duster, she headed towards the kitchen and that was where she saw him. After gulping down the water, he placed the glass on the table and at the same time, put his hand behind his neck and started to turn around. When he turned round, he saw Colleen staring at him with a look of disbelief. She dropped her duster and started screaming. Not before Peter had heard her say “Oh, my god, detective!” Preview: Will the whole town find out about Amanda and Drew? Who returns to the Bay hoping to get something of their chest? Will Pete's addiction get out of control?
Traceve Posted October 12, 2006 Report Posted October 12, 2006 Argh! A cliffhanger! I'm still curoius as to what pills Peter is taking..guess time will tell? You must update soon! Cant wait to see Peters reaction to Collleen
Lilone Posted October 12, 2006 Report Posted October 12, 2006 Teaser for Shannon... so impatient When he arrived at the beach, he felt a certain sense of calm rushed over to claim him. There was something about the beach that was able to relieve him. he sat down, watching and listening as the waves hit the shore. He reached inside his jacket pocket and took out the bottle of pills. He stared at it and started to play with the bottle in his hands. He was deciding as to whether or not he should take it. He unscrewed the bottle top and tilted the bottle as a white tablet fell into his palms. He screwed back the top and put the bottle back into his pocket. Once that was done, he stared at the pill like as though it was something bad. He knew it was wrong, yet he could not tear himself away from it. Taking those pills somehow helped him cope with everything. He brought his hand up to his mouth and hesitated there for a moment. Eventually, addiction gave way and he popped the pill into his mouth and swallowed it. As he did that, a hand touched his shoulder and Peter turned behind to see who it was. It was the last person that he had ever expected to see.
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