>>Emma<< Posted February 23, 2007 Report Share Posted February 23, 2007 Poor Jack! I feel so sorry for him... Richard really really annoys me, he makes me so angry inside, I just want to hit him. Haha Tasha I'll start calling him Dick aswell That was such a shock when Henry showed up, I was not expecting that. Update soon Nicole Great chapter. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
linzie_mac01 Posted February 23, 2007 Report Share Posted February 23, 2007 Aww that was the sweetest, Jack is so tender As i was reading the part with them dancing, take that came on on my ipod and i started swaying too. kinda ironic as well; "A million love songs later, and here i am trying to tell you, that i care..." i just thought that it was the perfect song for Jack to tell martha his feelings lol! Right now i'm thanking Henry for requesting their dance, 'cause otherwise they wouldn't have, and now Martha realises what she wants. All we have to do now is to get Richard to fall for Jack so that Henry goes after him too he he he Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
beckyboo Posted February 23, 2007 Report Share Posted February 23, 2007 Wahey she posted She was trying to give me little hints last night but I just kept gussing them Fantastic chapter Why the hell is Richard a jerk Update asap Nic Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Jade- Posted February 23, 2007 Report Share Posted February 23, 2007 Go9d, i hate Richard and Eamon. They are so selfish. They don't give a crap about Martha; all they care about is themselves. Jerks. They deserve to rot. They aren't good enough for Martha. Jack is a total sweetie. And LMAO off at the start of the chapter when he was paying out the jerks. ^ My feelings exactly - how can they be so mean to her?! What she's doing for them, is so that they can be together... (right?), so why are they denying her Jack. Please update as soon as you possibly can. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
beckyboo Posted February 23, 2007 Report Share Posted February 23, 2007 so why are they denying her Jack. . Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vale4eva Posted February 23, 2007 Report Share Posted February 23, 2007 Wow Nicole that was amazing! The whole dancing scene was so sweet Pitty they didnt kiss hehe Excellent writing yet again I really hate Richard! Why does he have to be such an arse! And Henrys defo here now, hes going to torment Jack and hes going to go after Martha! Oh my god this cant be happening! Run JnM. Run! Save yourselves! Great chapter, looking forward to the next one Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xsianx Posted February 23, 2007 Report Share Posted February 23, 2007 I blame Richard! Eamon can do no wrong. I think Richard hypnotized Eamon. Nasty Richard! Eamon is too good for him. May be it could be Richard and Jack ( ) because they seem to have good chemistry and get along like a house on fire Henry!!!! lol go on Jack, tackle him. Great writing Nic Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
baby gurl Posted February 23, 2007 Report Share Posted February 23, 2007 If I ever see Richard then it will be my personal job to kill that guy J/M dancing update soon Nicole...xx Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
*J&M* Posted February 24, 2007 Report Share Posted February 24, 2007 J&M dancing was cute Great chapter, update soon Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nicom Posted February 26, 2007 Report Share Posted February 26, 2007 (edited) *sighs* 1st day back - got a 50 minute after school detention! That's brilliance. I've even impressed myself there. lol This is my third after school detention ever; and my third in Year 11. Humm... I must have turned rebellious as I aged. 1st day back - managed to get 'the evil eye' off my chemistry teacher; by mocking her! Yes, the same teacher who gave me the detention... Maybe it wasn't a wise choice Nicole... I also got 'the evil eye' from her at the start of the lesson, for making my drink go "plop" when she first began talking. She actually stopped talking and stared down at me. She was acting as if I'd done it on purpose.... I have got better things to do than play with my stupid water bottle. (Like mocking her.. ) 1st day back - Had a battle of words between my form tutor when he caught me doing English homework in registration. I of course won... and whopped his ass. It was a great moment... GOD I LOVE SCHOOL! (note the sarcasm) So really, I should be doing something good with my time like coursework or the homework I completely forgot about; but instead I'm going to update for you guys, seen as though the teachers don't deserve my effort. Hopefully I'll post a chapter up later tonight. Edited February 26, 2007 by Nicom Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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