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OMG Nicole, that made me cry :( that was excellent, brilliant, amazing and any other word that describes very good, lol. That was so sweet how Jack was telling her how much he loves her, it made me cry and not much fanfics do. Also i loved the way you described the whole situation with Martha's friend Ben, poor Martha and you better not let the same thing happen to Jack.You're writing is excellent as well, you make it seem so real, both of these chapters have been a great start to your fic, I'm already hooked. Keep up with the happy scenes,

Please please update soon , i can't wait to read more

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Wow, great chapter. Poor Martha. Poor Ben :( So Martha and Ben were just friends, 'cause the way she spoke about him makes me think there was more. But that doesnt matter. Still sad. Nothing better happen to Jack now, or both Martha and I will be devestated :( But on a good note, Jack is such a sweetie :lol:

Please update soon :)

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