shawtyy Posted September 2, 2006 Report Share Posted September 2, 2006 Awww Jack is soo caring. Update soon! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xsianx Posted September 3, 2006 Report Share Posted September 3, 2006 Lol I need some JaCorey! Poor Corey, don't worry Jack I still Love you. Can't wait for the next chapter. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
beckyboo Posted September 5, 2006 Report Share Posted September 5, 2006 This is a fabby fic Post more like ASAP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! xxxxxxxxxxx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Home and Away Always!!! Posted September 6, 2006 Report Share Posted September 6, 2006 Thanks for all your lovely comments guys. Here is the next poart for you, but there might not be too many other chapters for a while becasue my yearly exams are very close and I must study, study, study. On second thoughts, it is kind of short, so if you want me to update sooner, just tell me. Chapter Three: Martha eventually fell asleep in her husband’s arms. Jack knew that she hadn’t slept well the night before. She had been up the whole time, worrying about Corey. He carried her and put her down on the bed in their room, planting a kiss on her forehead softly. He stared down at her. She was so beautiful, and she looked so peaceful, but he knew of all the hurt and pain she was going through, how broken she was. He went back to the kitchen to finish his coffee. Only five minutes later, Alf entered the house. “Hey Alf.” Jack greeted his grandfather in law. “G’day mate. How are you?” Alf responded with a smile. “Oh, we’re alright.” Jack sighed. Alf looked at him curiously, but just said, “I wanted to come see my granddaughter and her husband, see how they’re getting on. Where’s Martha?” “She’s actually asleep.” Jack informed him. “What, at this time of the day? Isn’t she feeling well?” Alf asked. “Not exactly.” Jack filled him in on the whole Corey saga. Alf was shocked. “What the flamin’ hell would he want with Martha anymore?” “Well, we both thwarted his plan last time, so he could want revenge.” “Oh.” Alf was silent for a moment. “You’ll take care of her Jack, won’t you?” “Of course I will.” Jack promised. “I’m not letting her out of my sight. He won’t get to her. Because I’m not going to let my wife go through all of that pain again.” Around two hours later, after Alf had gone home, Martha emerged from their room, bleary-eyed and hair tousled, though she was still perfect to Jack. “Hey.” He smiled at her. She came and sat on his lap. She stroked his face gently. “You know I love you, don’t you?” she said softly. He nodded. “I do. And you know I love you?” She nodded back. “I was just thinking about how lucky I am to have you. You’re the best thing that ever happened to me.” “Same here.” Said Jack, giving her a kiss. “I am so glad I married you.” Little did they know that Corey was outside their house, listening to every word they were saying. And the perfect plan was forming in his head. A plan that would get both Jack and Martha. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-ParaisGal- Posted September 6, 2006 Report Share Posted September 6, 2006 Dont be so mean! lol, please be nice *Hands a cookie bribe* Please? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
puja Posted September 6, 2006 Report Share Posted September 6, 2006 A sweet chapter! I'm loving how adorable and sweet Jack is being portrayed in these fic of late Please update soon...I want to know the evil plan Corey is trying to conjure up! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tasha Posted September 6, 2006 Report Share Posted September 6, 2006 Awwww...such a sweet chapter. Jack is the best. Alf is sweet too. Stupid Corey, get lost! Please update soon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Home and Away Always!!! Posted September 6, 2006 Report Share Posted September 6, 2006 Dont be so mean! lol, please be nice *Hands a cookie bribe* Please? Sorry, cookie bribes won't work!! Hehe don't worry, I'm only going to be mean for a little while longer! It may be cruel but I do enjoy it! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
beckyboo Posted September 6, 2006 Report Share Posted September 6, 2006 This is fabby!!!!!!!!!!! I loved it!!!!!!! Update like now ASAP!!!!!!!!!!!! xxxxxxxxxxxxxxx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bay girl Posted September 6, 2006 Report Share Posted September 6, 2006 Corey's an evil little son of a b***h. Hope you update soon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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