~Rosey~ Posted August 26, 2006 Report Share Posted August 26, 2006 PLEASEEE UPDATE SOON. now later maybe? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-ParaisGal- Posted August 26, 2006 Report Share Posted August 26, 2006 So we find out on the september date, or is that the date in the fic? I'm confused, sorry. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted August 26, 2006 Report Share Posted August 26, 2006 So we find out on the september date, or is that the date in the fic? I'm confused, sorry. The date is on the September date ok Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted August 26, 2006 Report Share Posted August 26, 2006 The next day Beth wakes up looking very fresh she sees a text message on her Cellphone she then reads it. ‘I am working today and our time is 6:00pm and Mr Stewart told me to tell you’ Beth then aspect it. Beth rings Alf Beth: Alf I got a Message from a guy who is working with me today Alf: Oh yeh sorry I didn’t tell you his name is Tama Smith Beth: Ok and will this Tama guy be great Alf: Yes and try not to fall for him which I know you won’t Beth: I won’t even if I find him attractive he will be a friend. I can’t wait Alf: Well I will leave you to it Beth: Thanks The Holden’s House-The Table Beth: Oh Mattie we need to be at the hospital in an hour ok. Mattie: Ok Lucas: Good luck Tony: Yeh Beth: Oh Tony I will be working at 6:00pm so I won’t be home until 12:00am at midnight Tony: That ok The Hospital Rachel: Come in Mattie and Beth Beth: So what wrong with Mattie Rachel: Well it that she got allergic to some food that she can’t eat Mattie I am really sorry if I tell you ok and yes some of the food you love you may not be able to eat. Mattie: Ok Rachel: This is a list of them Mattie reads the list of food she can’t have she feels heartbroken there is like 1. Lollies or sugars 2. Some vegs 3. Pancakes 4. Pasta 5. Radish-if eat radish you will get a very bad rash Beth: Sweetie I am so sorry Mattie: You know mum the ones I love is not for me anymore Rachel: Mattie is there any questions Mattie: No Beth and Mattie both leave Beth heads off to work Beth introduced her self to Tama Beth: Hi I am Beth Holden Tama: I am Tama Smith Beth: So you are great Tama: Yeh we will get on so good Beth: I can see that As both Beth and Tama walk in Beth look at Tama for 5 minutes Tama: Um Beth is everything ok Beth: Oh sorry yes I am fine The Holden’s House Tony: Um Mattie your Mother ask me to cook something special for tea Mattie: Yeh um Fish and stir-fry Tony: Ok only the Vegs you can have isn’t it Mattie: yes Lucas: Sorry about what happen Mattie: It ok I will get over it The Surf Club Two random guys come in Beth: Hello what can I get you? Man 1: A big beer with a bit of Vodka Beth: Ok Man: Same as him Tama: Beth I need to go but if you want me just ring me Beth: Sure Tama walks out Beth is alone The Holden’s House Tony: Guys I am off to bed ok Lucas: Yep goodnight dad Mattie: Yep goodnight One hour later Mattie: I am off to bed Lucas: Same The light is off The Surf Club it now 8:00pm Beth: No more Vodka left Man 2: Fine I am leaving Man 1: See you when you come over to see my girl Man 2: Yeh He looks at Beth as she was a girl he knows Beth: What a creep Man 1: Yeh oh my name is Luke Beth: Ok Luke so when do you leave Luke: Um not for a long time Beth: Ok so you are married Luke: No I am not I am divorce Beth: Sorry Luke: It ok Beth: I was divorce but I am married to someone else Luke: Luckier you Beth: Thanks you really enjoy talking Luke yes I do Beth starts to enjoy chatting to Luke as they both drink It midnight and Beth and Luke are talking until Beth cleaned the whole of the Surf Club and with the help of Luke, Luke tries to move closer to Beth but she moves Beth: What are you thinking Luke: Nothing Luke grabs Beth and starts kissing her Beth gets out of the kiss and pinch him hard Beth runs for the car and drives off Beth feels horrify of what just had happen. Will Tama tell Beth what he planned for Noah's Bar? Guys next update is up enjoy the Beth Storyline Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted August 26, 2006 Report Share Posted August 26, 2006 Guys the next part is on the way Are you all ready for the next update, 5... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Rosey~ Posted August 26, 2006 Report Share Posted August 26, 2006 Love it. Please post next chapter soon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
swfc Posted August 27, 2006 Report Share Posted August 27, 2006 This is really looking great, guys!! Loving it heaps! Please update soon! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted August 27, 2006 Report Share Posted August 27, 2006 The next part is up The Holden’s House Beth looks at the photo of her and Tony on their wedding day, Beth begins to cry as she is now confused with her feelings. The next day Beth walks along the beach wondering if she would tell Tony but then decide not to tell him she sees someone running along the beach, it Tama (opps no top on) Tama: Oh hey Beth Beth: Hey um will you be working tonight Tama: Yes Beth: Cool so what plans have you made? Tama: Um looking at a sign for me, you and the bar Beth: That sounds good Tama: Well um see you tonight Beth: Yeh Beth can’t take her eyes off him she seems confused since the kiss she had with Luke. Summer Bay High Belle and Drew are talking about the exams and how they won’t have time to see each other. Belle: But I want to be with you Drew: Look two weeks of exams Belle: Yeh and they are three hours long Drew: So you want to skip Summer Bay Belle: Ok Both Belle and Drew go to their homes and met back at the school and walks off. The Classroom Sally: Ok everyone what is genetic Cassie puts her hand up Sally: Cassie what is it Cassie: It what we are born with and can’t be change Sally: Very good Cassie now everyone I want you to do some revision ok Everyone starts doing their work. The Holden’s House Mattie and Tony talk about how Rhys broke Beth’s heart Mattie: I can tell you that he never stop loving his wife when he married my mum Tony: Poor Beth I know she no going to have her heartbroken when I am here Mattie: Yeh but my mum was so angry and she did throw a mug at Rhys but it hit the door though Tony: Holy she was that angry Mattie: Yep she was but when you stole her heart she was happy than before Tony: Um thanks Mattie I am happy as well Mattie: Yeh Rhys never like me or mum Tony: If he ever came I will just have to get him out the way Mattie: Yeh I would punch him lol he so deserves one Tony: Yeh but we do not punch people ok Mattie: Yeh Both Mattie and Tony have fun while Lucas at School in the Library The Beach House Beth knocks on the door and Robbie comes and answers it. Beth: Hey Sweetie Robbie: Hey mum so what do you want? Beth: Oh nothing I want a word Robbie: Ok Beth and Robbie walk into the living room Robbie: So what is it? Beth: Ok last night a guy came onto me and kiss me Robbie: What dose Tony know Beth: No and I can’t tell him Robbie: Mum you need to because if you don’t then your feelings are more confusing Beth: It already is Robbie: Ok it was Jack, Rhys, Tony, Luke and Tama Beth: Yes I can’t handle with my feelings for them even if Tama there Beth cellphone’s rings it Tama Beth: Oh hey Tama Tama: I want you to come at 6:00pm tonight Beth: Ok I will be there Beth hangs up Robbie: So what was that about? Beth: Oh it work Robbie: Yeh and then he will get together with you and then it will be finished Beth: I only met him yesterday Robbie: Ok The Holden’s House Beth gets change for work Tony: Hey babe looking sexy for work Beth: Thanks ok I am off Tony: Ok see you The surf Club Beth walks in Tama: Hey Beth Beth: Hey wow you are on the roll Tama: Yep As the night goes by Beth looks at Tama as he works very hard, Beth feels happy for what he has done not to mention Beth saw him at the beach with no shirt on. The surf club is empty with only Beth and Tama talking and Chatting Beth: You are amazing with the work you put Tama: Thanks I like to put a drink for you and me Beth: Um I would love that but when everyone is gone Tama: Sure Tama leaves and Beth can’t help her feelings for him. Who was the mystery guy that broke in and stole Beth’s Cellphone number? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tasha Posted August 27, 2006 Report Share Posted August 27, 2006 Willz, is there any Jack and Martha in this fan fic? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted August 27, 2006 Report Share Posted August 27, 2006 Willz, is there any Jack and Martha in this fan fic? Yep but they are not in this storyline but they will have a storyline with Robbie and Tasha Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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