mrsbrody Posted August 20, 2006 Report Share Posted August 20, 2006 This sounds like its going to be really good. keep up the good work Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-michelle- Posted August 20, 2006 Report Share Posted August 20, 2006 Please update soon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted August 23, 2006 Report Share Posted August 23, 2006 Nearly there guys It about two pages long on my Mircosoft word Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
swfc Posted August 23, 2006 Report Share Posted August 23, 2006 Urgh! I have to read it tomorrow instead! I bet it's going to be a great story!!! Keep up the good work, guys! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xsamie Posted August 23, 2006 Report Share Posted August 23, 2006 It sounds really good, I cant wait to read it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted August 24, 2006 Report Share Posted August 24, 2006 The next part is up On a hot sunny afternoon Mattie, Lucas, Cassie, Ric, Belle, and Drew are all walking along the beach they talked about school Mattie: So what did everyone have last spell Lucas: Boring English Cassie: Same Ric: Human Biology Drew: History Belle: Drama Mattie: I had Art The Diner Ric & Cassie walk in Colleen: Ok what can a get you? Ric: Juice Cassie: Juice as well As they both enjoying chatting, drinking they decide that they will take a steep in their relationship. The Holden House Mattie fakes a sickness when Beth ask her how was school Mattie: No Mum it just a tummy bug Beth: Oh sweetie how about a nice warm tea how about that Mattie: No I will be fine Beth: But you are sick Mattie: Could you stop worrying about me please Mattie stormed off to her bed Beth looks confuse A few minutes later Lucas: Hey Beth Beth: Hey sweetie how was your day Lucas: Oh goody good Beth: That’s good oh almost forgot was Mattie ok Lucas: Yeh she kept telling me that she is fine but keeps touching her tummy Beth: That strange she told me that had a tummy bug Lucas: Yeh but it painful the last time I saw her today Beth: Um that’s a mystery Lucas: Do you reckon she could be pregnant? Beth: No way Lucas: But do girls do that like I mean they touch their tummy every time when they are pregnant? Beth: Well I guess but Mattie hasn’t slept with anyone beside you though Lucas; Yeh she slept on a separate bed Beth: Um we will talk about it later ay Lucas: Ok oh Beth the potatoes are over boiled Beth: Holy yeh thanks for telling me Night time at the Holden house Beth calls out to Mattie but no reply Tony: I will get her Beth and Lucas seem to enjoy what they are talking about. Lucas: What do you think? Beth: Um I say it a tummy bug but I wouldn’t imagine Mattie with a big tummy can you? Lucas: No it would be heavy Beth: Yeh and painful Tony comes out to the table Tony: Mattie says she is not hungry Beth: Um ok Lucas: Mum can we still talk about it Beth: Sure sweetie Tony: Mother and son Beth: Yep it is do you remember when Lucas felt lonely about having no mum well I though if I could adopt him as my own one Tony: Well if you are sure then yes The Patterson/Baker Drew: Babe when are you coming to bed Belle: In a minute Drew: Ok Belle comes to Drew room Drew: Well welcome to surf paradise Belle: This is so romantic Drew: Yeh baby you and me forever Belle: Oh yeh Everyone is asleep everything will be ok but some wont as a matter of time who will be happy or least happy? But a shocking secret will tear a couple apart. One Family will learn about a death from the past and a face from the past. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
swfc Posted August 24, 2006 Report Share Posted August 24, 2006 Great fic! Can't wait for the update! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted August 26, 2006 Report Share Posted August 26, 2006 As the sun rise up the company of Lucas and Beth walking along together on the beach Beth: Sweetie what are you up to Lucas: Um going to Ric and Cassie Beth: Ok come and see me at 6:00pm tonight ok Lucas: Ok love you mum Beth: Love you to sweetie Lucas walk into a different direction while Beth heads for the suf club The Summer Bay Caravan Carpark 'Knock' Cassie opens the door Cassie: Oh hey Lucas Lucas: Hi um Ric here Cassie: Yeh he is in the shower Lucas: Ok Both Cassie and Lucas gose into the kitchen Cassie: So how is Mattie Lucas: Not too good and she staying with my dad for the day while I am with Beth Cassie: Ok she must be sick Lucas: It just that she acting odd lately Cassie: She is that not good Ric comes down stairs Lucas: Ric sup Ric: Oh sup Lucas Lucas: Um want to go and walk along the beach Ric: Yeh ok Lucas: Cassie you can come if you want to Cassie: Ok we will go now aye Lucas: Ok The Patterson/Baker House Drew: lol babe I will just go and get some food Belle: Ok Drew walks in the Kitchen and steels some food Leah catchs him from the living room Drew: Oh Leah I am just getting something Leah: Really and then make a huge mess in your room Drew: No me and Belle will be having plates Leah: Yeh what ever clean your mess when I come back from work Drew: Yes Aunty Leah Leah walks out and heads off to work The Beach Ric: So what up with Mattie Lucas: Don't know she seems to rub her tummy all the time Cassie: No way is she Preagant? Lucas: No she is not it that she seems odd at the momet Ric: Yeh I say Mattie been through hard times Lucas: She sure has They walk in and out of the Diner and eat their food on the beach Cassie: Yum my Fave Juice Ric: Dose that make you feel better Lucas: Yeh thanks guys They both walk off to their way back Lucas walks up to the suf club The Holden House Mattie: Um Tony I feel sick Tony: It ok just let your tummy go down Mattie: Yeh so when Mum and Lucas coming back? Tony: Don't know yet Mattie: Um it late Tony: Yeh maybe Beth and Lucas might be cleaning the suf club Mattie: Yeh Tony gives Mattie a hug while Beth and Lucas clean up the suf club Beth: So how was your day Lucas: Good acutally and yours Beth: Ok but these two guys were rude so Alf kick them out Lucas: That good I am glad you are not going after anyone else Beth: Yeh Beth dosn't smile Outside the suf club two mens are spying on Lucas and Beth Lucas: Let go and do something together Beth: Um do you reckon Lucas: Yeh Beth drives the car to Mc Donalds and get their food and drives home Everyone are talking and eating in the twon of summer bay but one is not feeling good, Beth worries that the next day might be a bad one as she works night shift. What dose Beth find out that Mattie got? Will Drew and Belle try and leave the bay or will Dan stop them? This is a teaser What Happen with Beth at the suf club?? (It wont be reveal untill September 13th 2006) you will find a clue in the next update Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
swfc Posted August 26, 2006 Report Share Posted August 26, 2006 I cannot believe we're going to have to wait for ages!! Great fic guys! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted August 26, 2006 Report Share Posted August 26, 2006 Yeh I know but what shocking about this and don't forget to find clues in each update as we count down to the revealing date. I am glad you love it also look out for Beth and her work Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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