tasha7905 Posted July 27, 2006 Report Share Posted July 27, 2006 Great chapter. Colleen and cocaine Cant wait for more. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bella Posted July 27, 2006 Report Share Posted July 27, 2006 Woah. Great work! Especially the Drew stuff... Keep it coming! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Traceve Posted July 27, 2006 Report Share Posted July 27, 2006 Wow! Great stuff! Update soon! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lilone Posted July 27, 2006 Report Share Posted July 27, 2006 Everyone is leaving Irene’s when Lance and Sally decide to go to the police station to find out about Colleen. Sally and Lance leave Irene’s house. Just as Irene, Tasha and Robbie are tidying up there is a knock on the door. Tasha opens the door and see’s Alf standing with a big present in his hand. “Alf Alf” Irene shouts in excitement. Alf walks threw the door and say’s “Were is everyone, Where’s Colleen?” “it’s a long story” said Irene really not wantin g to tell Alf where Colleen is. Alf looks over to the door then back at Irene “you might aswell be the first person to meet her” “Meet who” Irene asked curiously. “My fiancé” Alf said as he walked over to a young lady standing by the door Next time on What If! Who does Maddie reject Lucas? What life changing decision does Tony make? Will Sally beable to let her feeling grow for Brad? Find out tomorrow at 12pm Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shawtyy Posted July 28, 2006 Report Share Posted July 28, 2006 Colleen with drugs! This is interesting, update soon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Lynd~ Posted July 28, 2006 Report Share Posted July 28, 2006 This is really good.I especially like the Drew bits... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lilone Posted July 28, 2006 Report Share Posted July 28, 2006 Episode 3 (Police station) Colleen enters the station handcuffed with Lara and Constable Rice. “Lara if you get the interview room set up I will just find Mrs Smart’s file” Rice said as he entered the office. Rice walked over to the file cabinet and looked for Colleen’s file, as he was looking threw the files he spotted a picture at the back of the cabinet, Rice reached down and picked up the photo. Rice sat down on the chair next to the cabinet looking at the picture. Lara entered the office wanting to start the interview “Rice you ready?” Lara said as she looked at Rice. “Yeah” Rice said trying not to build up more tears in his eyes. “What’s that” Lara asked as she begun to wonder why Rice was crying. Rice passed Lara the photo of Pete, Lara, Rice and Jack on Peter’s 33rd birthday. The photo made Lara stop all her thoughts about work and she began to cry as she thought of Peter being so happy and handsome. “He was such a good bloke” Lara said trying to hold back the mountain of tears that were trying to get out. “Yeah I know” replied Rice getting up out of his seat. Lara wiped her eyes and placed the photo on the desk before leaving Peter’s old office. Sally and Lance enter the police station. “Lara what’s going on” Sally asked Lara as she walked near the front desk. “We are just about to interview her but it’s not looking good” replied Lara. “Can I see my mum” Lance asked as he gets even more confused about his mum taking drugs. “After the interview maybe!” replied rice. Rice and Lara enter the interview with Colleen waiting for them. 20 minutes later….. “They should be finished by now” Lance said as he got even more worked up. “They will be out soon” replied Sally as she tried to keep carm. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tasha7905 Posted July 28, 2006 Report Share Posted July 28, 2006 Great update. I wonder whats going to happen with Lucas and Matilda. Who is Alf's fiance? Hope there is more soon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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