Traceve Posted July 16, 2006 Report Posted July 16, 2006 Thanks to Tamxxx for the great Idea Part.1 As Dani Sutherland got off the bus in Summerbay, the hot sun above her hit her bare shoulders bringing a warm sensation to her pale skin. She had been gone from the bay for 2 years, he skin was pale. Her tan gone. Dani looked around. It was still the same, small town with a beach full of handsome topless guys. She flipped her long brown hair over her shoulder. Dani picked up her bags and walked to her new house. It was a nice little house, right on the beach. As she walked past the familiar houses, she noticed Beth out in her garden weeding her yard. Beth glanced up and saw Dani. “Dani?” Beth asked dropping her spade “Yes?” Dani thought oh great sprung. “How are you?” Beth asked Dani. “Im ok,” Dani said smiling. Dani walked off, towards her house. She was living next-door to Beth. Oh great Dani thought to herself, im next door to it. Dani unlocked the door and let herself in. Home sweet home, she thought to herself as she dropped her bags by the door. Hopefully the moving truck will be here soon she thought to herself. Just then the movers pulled up, Dani glanced out the window and saw them pull up. About time, she thought to herself, letting them in. When the movers left, Dani walked into her bathroom, she looked in the mirror at herself, and her skin was so pale. “Looks like 2 years away took its toll on me,” Dani said laughing at herself. Why am I even here, she thought to herself, I don’t know anyone, all my friends have left, but, I cant go back to the city, not after what happened. Dani got changed into her tiny bikini, put on her new flip flops and headed to the beach. As she walked across the soft sand, the tide was in so their were quite a few gorgeous guys surfing. She put her towel down and flopped on the ground. She lay back letting the sun hit her skin. It was good to be back in the bay she thought to herself all these guys. Who does she run into in the Diner?
Tamxxx Posted July 16, 2006 Report Posted July 16, 2006 OMG, you made me cry I want Dani back! I can imagine that scene so vividly, aww thanks for the credit shannon
Traceve Posted July 16, 2006 Report Posted July 16, 2006 OMG, you made me cry I want Dani back! I can imagine that scene so vividly, aww thanks for the credit shannon Aww thanks for the comment..Its going to be a shocker.
xGlowingAngelx Posted July 16, 2006 Report Posted July 16, 2006 Interesting read. Please update soon.
I love music Posted July 16, 2006 Report Posted July 16, 2006 Nice to see a Dani fic for a change. Well done. “Yes?” Dani thought oh great sprung. I like that. Made me smile!
Traceve Posted July 16, 2006 Report Posted July 16, 2006 * Warning, Adult Themes* Previously… As she walked across the soft sand, the tide was in so there were quite a few gorgeous guys surfing. She put her towel down and flopped on the ground. She lay back letting the sun hit her skin. It was good to be back in the bay she thought to herself all these guys. Chapter.2. As the rays were hitting her skin, someone stood in front of the sun, blocking it from Dani’s eyes. Belle stood still. “Aren’t you Dani?” She asked Dani. “Yes, why?” Dani replied. “Im Belle,” Belle said sitting next to Dani on the soft sand. “How did you know who I am?” Dani asked Belle. “Im just smart,” Belle grinned. “Come on Babe, we got to go,” Macca said. Belle and Macca walked off hand in hand leaving Dani. “Hi, Mr Stewart,” Dani said as she walked into the Diner. “Flamin hell, Dani Sutherland?” Alf exclaimed. “Yes,” Dani said with a small smile. “What brings you here?” Alf asked Dani. “Umm, long story,” Dani said quietly. Alf got the impression that Dani didn’t want to talk about it, so he let it be. Dani went up to the counter. Irene served her. “Hey Irene, Can I please have a coffee?” Dani asked her. “Sure thing girly, it’s nice to see you again,” Irene said with a smile. Dani got her coffee and went a sat in a booth alone. Why am I here? She asked herself, why did things have to go wrong. “Dani?” A voice said. She looked up; it was Kim and some woman with curly hair. “Hi Kim,” She said with a smile. “Hey Dani,” Kim said sitting himself down. “This is my wife, Rachel,” he said gesturing to her. “Oh hi,” Dani said warmly. “What brings you back her?” Kim asked her. “Oh umm no reason,” Dani said with a false smile. “Kim, we have to go, im late,” Rachel said to Kim. “Nice meeting you,” She said walking out. Dani walked out of the diner and headed back to her new home. She saw a few familiar faces on her way. When she got to her house she was just about to unlock the front door when a voice from behind her spoke up. “You have a lot of nerve coming back here!” Dani spun around it was Matilda. “What do you want?” Dani said. “Nothing,” Matilda said smirking. “Then why are you here?” Dani asked her. “I just thought I would tell you what I think of you,” Matilda said still smirking. “And that is?” Dani was getting tired of Matilda. “You are evil, you brought Sarah to the bay, which brought Zoë, and well you know the rest,” Matilda shouted at her. “What ever,” Dani said going inside and shutting the door behind her. Dani walked into the bathroom, she grabbed a razor from the shelf, she debated whether or not to do it, she turned her arm over revealing her scar from last time. Dani did it, as she did she held back tears, it hurt badly. She couldn’t believe she had done it again; she grabbed a cloth and held it tight around her wrist as she let out a few tears.
sally Posted July 16, 2006 Report Posted July 16, 2006 that was brilliant cant wait to read more update soon plz
Trinity Posted July 16, 2006 Report Posted July 16, 2006 It was good. I've never read any fan fictions but after reading that I think I have to start read others too ;) Can't wait for update.
~Lynd~ Posted July 17, 2006 Report Posted July 17, 2006 It's really good already,it's nice to read a fic about a past character..
Traceve Posted July 17, 2006 Report Posted July 17, 2006 It's really good already,it's nice to read a fic about a past character.. Thanks This one is more popular than Rachel & Kims
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