Guest Posted June 29, 2006 Report Share Posted June 29, 2006 Diner Flat: Alf & Martha are there Martha: Grandad I feel sick every time when I look at my fat tummy Alf: Love you are not fat and trust me you are going to be fine They both hug Outside a black Street-A dark Figure comes outside Dan & Leah's house creeps into VJ room Inside Dan & Leah's Place Rachal gose to the Toilet little she know's that the stalker is only one room away The stalker lashes out at Rachal as she start's Sreacming Kim,Leah,Dan all run where rachal is THe Stalker unmasked him self Leah & Dan are shock Kim's face is red with fury Hunter/Holden house-Beth & Tony are there Beth: So how are we going to tell the Kids Tony: I don't know but we could suprize them Beth:stop right there Beth gets down on one knee and says 'Tony will you Marry Me' Tony looks suprize Tony: I don't know what to say if you are happy about it Beth: I am you are the Man I want to spend the rest of my life with you Tony: Well ok then Yes I will marry you Tony Lift up Beth and they both Kiss Mattie & Lucas are shocked Mattie: Mum what you lied to me about everything You are Pregant and you are getting Married I know what you said I been listing every word you said Lucas: How can you do this to us I am 16 and know I have a Brother/Sister who gonna be 16 years youger Tony: guys just calm down Mattie: Don't you tell me to calm down let go Lucas Mattie & Lucas stormed out the door The Vale house-Amanda has a gun Amanda pulls the triger and bang the gun had went off and then runs off The next moring The Beach House Irene & Belle are there Belle: So Mum what are you up to today Irene: Nothing really But how about a Mother & Daughter Day how about that Belle: Yep I would love that I am glad I found you Mum Irene & Belle hugs Who Died? who is Kiddnaped? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-michelle- Posted June 29, 2006 Report Share Posted June 29, 2006 Great chapter. Please post more soon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jackieleanne Posted June 29, 2006 Report Share Posted June 29, 2006 Good work, can't wait to see what happens. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted June 30, 2006 Report Share Posted June 30, 2006 Amanda's Flat- The Dead Body of Barry is still lying still Police Station-Jack & Peter are there Jack: Pete I think we need to find out why the three stalkers is on the loose Peter's cellphone rings It Dan Dan says he just walks into the flat and saw barry dead on the floor Amanda's Flat-Dan,Jack,Peter are there Peter: another death who could this be Jack: I don't know but telling Irene won't be easy Dan: Yeh I think you should tell Irene as that Barry was killed The Hunter/Holden House-Mattie & Lucas are there Mattie: Lucas do you know how my mum and your dad are getting married Lucas: Yeh Mattie: Well we could throw an engament party Lucas: That would be a brillent Idea The Beach House- Irene is There Irene is watching Shortland Street on TV2 There is a knock on the door Jack comes in He look Sarced Irene: Jack what is it Jack: You know Barry he died at Amanda's Place Irene way balling her eyes out Tasha comes in Tasha trys to talk to Irene Irene runs off up stairs Night Time: In Irene's bedroom Irene is still crying Robbie comes in and put his hand around Irene shoulder Robbie: Irene I am really sorry about barry Irene: Robbie I just want to go to sleep but every time when I wake up I still think he still here I just miss so much Irene is now out of Control Who share's a Shocking Kiss The Hunt for Barry Hyde Killer is under way Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Traceve Posted June 30, 2006 Report Share Posted June 30, 2006 Great Story so far. Your very talented..Cant wait to see what happens to Rachael. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted June 30, 2006 Report Share Posted June 30, 2006 Diner Flat: Irene & Alf are there Alf: Hello love what are you doing Irene: Can I talk to you for a minute Alf: Sure what is it Irene: I never felt this strong before about you Alf: Irene are you ok Irene moves quckily towards Alf and Kiss him on the lips Alf: Woh Irene I never had a Person that was a good kisser like you A bush: Charile & Rachal are there Charile: Be quite you annyoing B**** or I will have you make you even more hurt Rachal: Let me go you Flammin Beast Dan & Leah's Place Leah: Kim have you call Rachal yet Kim: Yeh but no answers Leah: Man I wish we never met Charile Dan: Yeh you know I hope Rachal is fine A road Martha & Jack are driving Jack: Babe do you want a special lunch Martha: Yeh...ouch.ouch Jack: Are ok martha Martha: No I think the baby is coming out Jack: Ok hold your bum tight Martha: I can't Jack hold my tummy Jack Jack: Martha I am driving ok The Hospital Martha is in labour Jack is holding her hand Martha: The baby coming Push Jack: Babe calm down Police Station: Peter is in his room Peter open a file could this be it Barry Hyde Killer is Revealed Stay Tune over the next 2 weeks The Killer is finally exspose? Will Irene & Alf get to together? Who get Raped? Will Rachal be safe? A New Family arrived In Town Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted June 30, 2006 Report Share Posted June 30, 2006 Ok The Day start off with Amanda revealed as Barry Hyde Killer The Bush: Rachal is alone Rachal tries to undo the ropes She gets out and makes a run for it Charile comes back where his little camp ground is he is shock that rachal is'nt there he runs off to find her About 20km away from the campsite rachal feels a pain in her head she collaspe The Beach House-Irene is reading the newspaper Alf comes in Alf: Hi love remeber that kiss last night I just want to pretend it never happen Irene: Ok Irene gose to her room she starts to cry Night Time Cassie is walking on the beah after the shouting at sally so much Cassie is konck down to the ground she srecms for help The night of her rape gives her nightmares Will Paris return to Irene? The news of the next death send shockwaves to the bay? Will Rachal make it to the hospital alive? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jackieleanne Posted June 30, 2006 Report Share Posted June 30, 2006 Good chapters looking forward to see what happens. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-michelle- Posted June 30, 2006 Report Share Posted June 30, 2006 Love it. Cant wait to find out what happens next. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted June 30, 2006 Report Share Posted June 30, 2006 A road which lead right at the start of summer bay-A car gose by The Hunter/Holden House-Beth & Tony are there Tony: Guess what Babe I am a Grandad I can't wait to met the baby Beth: I can't wait either A New Street-THe new Family had arrived Will & Brenda Holloway are now Intodroucd to The openings Credits Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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