-michelle- Posted May 25, 2006 Report Share Posted May 25, 2006 Loving it. Please update soon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Jade- Posted May 31, 2006 Report Share Posted May 31, 2006 Well i'm back from holiday and I finally got around to writing more of my fic after some pestering from Nicole! lol i'm so sorry it has taken so long to update, I've been reallly slow on this fic - i'm usually 5000 chapters ahead. lol Anyways you've probably forgotten what has happened so far but this is ch5. Please tell me what you think - your comments mean a lot to me! =) Chapter 5 After just a few weeks, Martha was beginning to feel truly at home in the bay. She had met Alf, Morag and Ric and they had welcomed her into their family with no problems. She already had many friends and the setting was beautiful. The beach had helped her in so many ways. But still there was the problem of Chris and Jack. Two men who both played a huge part in her life, and spent a lot of time in her thoughts; but for opposite reasons. Actually Martha hardly ever saw Jack, but even she couldn’t pretend that he wasn’t special. They had something that couldn’t be ignored and it made her angry and upset that she couldn’t do anything about it. She hardly knew Jack and yet whenever he was around, she felt safe. Whenever she saw him, she got a warm tingly feeling inside. And on the rare occasions that they touched, the desire she felt was stronger than anything she had ever experienced before. She could see it, every time she looked into his eyes; he wanted her as much as she wanted him. ******************************************************************************* Chris woke up and saw Martha lying beside him. He smiled. He felt happy knowing that she was his forever. He knew that he shouldn’t have done what he did, but he had come to the conclusion that it had all been worth it. It had all been worth it to be able to keep Martha. He looked at her and stroked her face gently, thinking how beautiful she looked whilst she was sleeping. ******************************************************************************** Martha kept her eyes closed shut. She knew that Chris was looking at her and she knew that he was touching her, but she still pretended to be asleep. She had worked out that this was the best way of avoiding having do things she didn’t want to do. After all she had to obey Chris’ every word; despite how much she hated to do it. ******************************************************************************** Jack woke up slowly and reached out next to him, expecting to feel someone there. And then he realized. It all came flooding back. He realized that he had been dreaming again; dreaming of Martha lying next to him; of waking up to her in the morning. For what must have been about the 50th time he had to remind himself that unfortunately that was one dream that was never going to come true. ******************************************************************************** Martha walked down the beach, with Chris’ arm around her waist. She smiled when she passed her friends; acting like a fiancée should; totally content and blissfully happy. But her and Chris knew that it was all an act. She didn’t love him; she just had to pretend she did. Please tell me what you think! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
[.jessa-belle.] Posted May 31, 2006 Report Share Posted May 31, 2006 I hate Chris now........why dosnt he let Martha go.............Please please please update soon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jamey-Maria Posted June 1, 2006 Report Share Posted June 1, 2006 Yay, an update. I have an idea of what Chris did but i'm not sure! Awww i love how they hardly now each other and yet they know how strongly they both feel. Why doesn't Chris just rack off......actually then you wouldn't have a fic to write and we can't have that:p Please update soon! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lollipop_lover11 Posted June 1, 2006 Report Share Posted June 1, 2006 great story Why can't chris let martha go? It's obvious that Jack and Martha are meant to be together? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
linzie_mac01 Posted June 1, 2006 Report Share Posted June 1, 2006 I love this update but i can't understand why Martha and Chris are together; does he know that she doesn't actually like him? Oh I almost forgot to say; i thought i would tell you cause it was such a coincidence: I started to read this chapter and 'Stuck on you' by Lionel Richie came on the radio. It made me chuckle cuase i had just started reading the whole part about how they couldn't stop thinking about each other and then both wishing they were in each others beds lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Jade- Posted June 1, 2006 Report Share Posted June 1, 2006 I love this update but i can't understand why Martha and Chris are together; does he know that she doesn't actually like him? Well he does, but there is a reason that he's got her trapped! But what is it? lol You'll just have to wait and see.... Bay Girl: No guessing!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nicom Posted June 1, 2006 Report Share Posted June 1, 2006 I love this update but i can't understand why Martha and Chris are together; does he know that she doesn't actually like him? Well he does, but there is a reason that he's got her trapped! But what is it? lol You'll just have to wait and see.... Bay Girl: No guessing!! I know it I know it I know it I know it!! But my mouth is sealed... (unless anyone is offering out chocolate ;-) Then something can be arranged.. lol) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bay girl Posted June 1, 2006 Report Share Posted June 1, 2006 Loving this fic. Cant wait to read some more. I love this update but i can't understand why Martha and Chris are together; does he know that she doesn't actually like him? Well he does, but there is a reason that he's got her trapped! But what is it? lol You'll just have to wait and see.... Bay Girl: No guessing!! I would never do such a thing. He He He He. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dolly-999 Posted June 1, 2006 Report Share Posted June 1, 2006 just a question, why does she have to pretend that she's in love with him, and whay does she have to do what he says? Great update, looking forward to reading more. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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