jack is so hot Posted April 18, 2006 Report Share Posted April 18, 2006 yep i am nearly done!!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sal_gurl Posted April 18, 2006 Report Share Posted April 18, 2006 i love can't wait it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nicom Posted April 18, 2006 Report Share Posted April 18, 2006 =D! He he! Looking forward to it! =) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
linzie_mac01 Posted April 18, 2006 Report Share Posted April 18, 2006 Looking forward to the next chapter!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jess Posted April 21, 2006 Report Share Posted April 21, 2006 Hey! I'm loving this FanFic so far.....when's the next chapter up? (I don't wanna sound rude or pushy here, I just wanna read what happens next!) ;D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nicom Posted April 21, 2006 Report Share Posted April 21, 2006 You just got me excited then! lol I thought it'd been updated.... *grumbles* lol =P Off Topic:Jeh-jeh, you live where the Robbie comes from ! lol He is awesome! =) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sal_gurl Posted April 21, 2006 Report Share Posted April 21, 2006 I love it please post more soon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jack is so hot Posted April 22, 2006 Report Share Posted April 22, 2006 ok the next chapter is up Chapter Three Martha and Jack walked up to the Holden’s house. They went inside, they found Tony, Beth, Matilda and Lucas sitting around the table eating dinner, and Jack wanted to avoid any questions, so he directed Martha into his room. He shut the door and turned to Martha before he could open his mouth Martha had spoken “Jack, I am really confused” she said sitting on his bed Jack sat down next to her “Why” he asked but he had an idea why “Well, I am confused, about, about us, first I come, which probably made it worse, then you just started comforting me and I am really confused” she said “ If you are wondering why I was comforting you” he said trying to make this sound easy “I still” he stopped “I still have feelings for you” he said and looked down “Why couldn’t you have told me that” she said “I don’t know, because now you hate me even more” he said standing up “You really think I hate you, Jack why do you think I came to you instead of well I don’t know, grandad or Ric” she said starting to sound frustrated “maybe because , I STILL LOVE YOU, AND I NEED YOU” she said and then she started to cry falling to the ground “And you always thought I hated you” she said kneeling on the ground Jack went down to the ground putting his hand on hers “Well its lucky I told you that” he said Martha looked up at him “W-why” she stuttered Jack put his hand under her chin , Martha let him guide it towards her mouth, Jack stopped as there noses touched they rubbed them against each others noses, then Jack directed his mouth towards hers , Martha wanted to tease him , she rubbed her lips over his, even though it was a kiss , Jack still felt so good , and Martha felt even better when Jack captured her lips in a searing kiss , that sent a hot spark coursing through her body. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nicom Posted April 22, 2006 Report Share Posted April 22, 2006 Very good! Looking forward to next chapter! They're finally together! Yey! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bay girl Posted April 22, 2006 Report Share Posted April 22, 2006 Nice work. Hope you update soon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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