dolly-999 Posted February 13, 2006 Report Share Posted February 13, 2006 Topic Title - When I was Ten Topic Description – Maddie and lucas, rated G Type of story: One shot Rating: G Main Characters: Maddie and Lucas Genre: not really sure Is Story being proof read: No Summary: Maddie and Lucas are about to find out they've known each other alot longer than they thought. Hey, this is something I wrote this morning while I was bored, it's no that good but I thought I'd show you anyway. “Hey” Maddie greeted her boyfriend as he sat down at the desk next to her in their English class ready for their first class of the day. “Hey” he replied “What a way to start the first day back at school” Lucas groaned. “Yeah I know, he better not give us to much work” Maddie added. “Ok class, today I want you to write about something that happened to you when you were younger, it can be about anything like your best friend moving away or a pet you had. I want you to write a paragraph in silence and at the end of class I want them all handed in on my desk with your name on it” Mr Baker announced from the front of the room. Everyone groaned for a second before getting to work. “Do you know what your going to write?” Maddie asked Lucas who was staring at the pen that her was fiddling with his fingers. “Yeah I think so. What are you going to write?” “You'll see when I'm finished” Maddie insisted. “Ok” Lucas replied before turning his head away from Maddie and down at his paper to start writing. 'When I was ten' he stared 'me and my family were moving away from the country town we lived in to the city. I had to leave my childhood sweetheart, although I can't actually remember her name. I remember giving her a kiss under a tree at the back of the yard of the one class roomed school'. Lucas looked over what he had written, 'It'll do' he thought to himself, it wasn't his best piece of writing but he couldn't be bothered to write anymore. At the same time Maddie was writing the reverse side to what Lucas. 'When I was ten my first boyfriend moved away' it started. “You finished?” She asked after writing a paragraph. “Yeah, can I read yours?” “Yeah” Maddie said handing him her piece of paper and taking his. They both read in silence and when they finished they both stared at each other in shock. “It was you” they both gasped. Ok, tell me what you think, even if you thought it was stupid. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Tess- Posted February 13, 2006 Report Share Posted February 13, 2006 Love it!!!! It's great...Young love, then even younger love! Please post more soon! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Penie Posted February 13, 2006 Report Share Posted February 13, 2006 Its funny but unrealistic. Carry on, loving it!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
anettek Posted February 13, 2006 Report Share Posted February 13, 2006 sweet Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sal_gurl Posted February 17, 2006 Report Share Posted February 17, 2006 Please Post more Soon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
*Ice* Posted February 18, 2006 Report Share Posted February 18, 2006 That was really good =) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
caitlin87 Posted February 19, 2006 Report Share Posted February 19, 2006 Sweet! Good job, I really like the idea. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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