Furze-Forever Posted March 11, 2006 Report Share Posted March 11, 2006 Wowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww!!!! This is awesome, I love how your ideas unfold throughout the chapter, with the reader unable to guess what's going to happen at the start - it keeps us gripped. I'm also a fan of this 'emotional drama' that you seem to have put into it, though I love the Dalby fic (sure you know why Liam lol), this too is great simply because of the emotion. You have a great mind, this fic really is interesting, it's not predictable or too simple, which makes it enjoyable to read. Keep up the good work hun! Lucy xxx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
liam99998204 Posted March 11, 2006 Report Share Posted March 11, 2006 Thanks very much Lucy! Any others? Liam Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guevara01 Posted March 11, 2006 Report Share Posted March 11, 2006 Great fanfic, keeping us guessing. The level of emotion is great, and it's better coming from Lucas as he is a younger member, and i don't think we've seen that level of emotion from his character on TV yet. This is developing nicely . . xx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Emma_B Posted March 13, 2006 Report Share Posted March 13, 2006 I really like this fanfic. It's really well written and believable, and I agree with Guevara that it's good to see emotion from Lucas that we don't get on the show. xxx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-lolly- Posted March 13, 2006 Report Share Posted March 13, 2006 wow this is really really good. i agree that its great to see lucas showing emotion. please update soon! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Holly Posted March 14, 2006 Report Share Posted March 14, 2006 Great work Liam, am loving the emotion in the story, your doing a great job with it. Hoping for an update soon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
x..kt..x Posted March 20, 2006 Report Share Posted March 20, 2006 That really good! Can't wait for some more, but next time mention more Jack! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
liam99998204 Posted March 20, 2006 Report Share Posted March 20, 2006 Hey, Don't worry there is plenty of Jack coming up soon! Liam Thanks for all the kind reviews! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nicom Posted March 22, 2006 Report Share Posted March 22, 2006 Love it! Very Mysterious! lol My hand feels wierd though, thinking about it the scratching! lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
liam99998204 Posted March 22, 2006 Report Share Posted March 22, 2006 There is a lot to come. I am hoping to update soon but have a lot on my plate! Exams and such! Keep reading though, its going to get even better... Liam Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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