Channy!!!

They were two really sad chapters.. Poor Martha trying to end her life, her best friend needs her now. I feel sorry for Jack, something has to be done about Ranya and Kim.. please update soon, Xx

Jack and Martha are cute.. I hate papparazi I feel sorry for real celebs expecially the likes of Britney how is she meant to get her life together with them broadcasting her every move.... Don't re-think the story and make Martha move away NOOO! haha great chapters update soon please!

Loved it! They are so cute.. U can't let them go from to ?

Tasha having cancer is so sad.. it's going to worse when everyone knows, poor girl.. I love Mika's song.. it's the only song of Mika's I actually like lol! YAY Martha realises she loves Jack, now all she has to do is kick Stevies cheeting A** out the door and be with Jack! Update soon please

great update.. I'm glad Jack isn't giving up... I bet Marthas bf is a jerk like Cam was... Poor Tash having cancer, her friends will be there though. Martha recieves a CD? hmm.. maybe from Jack like Marissa and Ryans model home mix. I look forward to the next chapter!

Good update... YAY Martha slapped Ranya, she soo deserved it! I feel sorry for Jack, he's losing Martha and he hasn't done anything wrong. a month later Martha returns...what will happen? - hopefully Matilda and Lucas hit a snag in there relationship - naww thats not good I like Mattie and Lucas Tasha and Robbie get some unexpected news - pregnant??? Anyways it's still really great, glad you're updating soon!

OH yay! I'll be able to read it when I get home!

I've decided to end the story here, as I think it's a good happy ending. Please check out my new fic I'll Never Give Up! Thank you all for reading, it means alot!

OMGISH that's low spiking someones drink... Just when I thought I couldn't hate Ranya anymore. Good chapter though please update soon.. n im sorry ur sunburnt n sore!

going away to work isnt exactly fun lol but I'll try and I'm going to post the next chapter in about an hour oh ok hmm. u never know something fun might happen... yay an update!

Hey just got up to date.. I'm still loving it Tasha better not like Jack errr... please say she likes Robbie haha Kim and Ranya should get together they are both jack as***. Please update soon and have fun while you are away

Hey I really like it, Kym is a Jerk and Ranya is a bit*h.. I so want someone to snap her. Good fiction please update.

I would like to read it, please post an update!

sorry I haven't updated in a little while, I've been flat out with work. I should have an update ready later today or tomorrow... I hope everyone hasn't lost interest.

I also think you mean funeral. More please. Yea I meant funeral, I didn't even notice the mistake, thanks for pointing it out. Also thanks everyone for the great compliments, I'm glad you think I'm a good writer. :-)

Hey thanks good to know you like it :-)! Ella isn't in the story, I wasn't really sure how to include her in the storyline.

Good chapter... The whole tough love thing was funny pity it didn't work. Mhm bubble bath for two. so McDreamy and Meredith ish but sounds hot lol! update soon plz

Haha yes that made sense. Just doing up and update now. Thanks for the review.

LOVED IT!! It had heaps of action etc. and I loved how you explained Jack punching Leon.. haha go JACKY! Update soon please..

Leon is an ass... Jack's got to stop dancing with Laurie and save Martha (deck Leon lol).. Then they can get back together again. Wahh what a cliffhanger to leave it at. Please UPDATE Xx

GREAT CHAPTER.. as others have said they really do have great chemistry. Hope they end the night together they are sooo meant to be. The watch and the inscription on it was so nawwww... beautiful. Thanks for the update, look forward to one soon haha. Channy Xx

GREAT CHAPTER.. as others have said they really do have great chemistry. Hope they end the night together they are sooo meant to be. The watch and the inscription on it was so nawwww... beautiful. Thanks for the update, look forward to one soon haha. Channy Xx

Great chapter, sad but good... I hope they get back together soon, they really do love each other. Update soon plz Channy Xx

Just read all 38 pages of your fan-fiction and I really like it... You are a really good writer and I love your characters... I think Martha should trust Jack he's changed he's no longer sleezy (not that he ever was sleezy towards Martha) but he respects her, so I don't think he's cheating. Please update soon! Channy Xx