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Poor Mac I hope she tells Jack soon Can't wait for more

Ditto Please update soon

Is it fan fic law to finish the chapter when it starts getting good and interesting? Can't wait for more

I don't want it to end *sniffs and shuffles over ot the corner to cry* Good work it was great.

Hmmmm yes I totaly agree nut I have a quick qeustion can you please get rid of Megan she's such a b!a+ch! Sorry but I had to say that Can't wait for more.

Please update soon I'm loving this fic!

Totaly agree. Please update soon

Jack help her! Please update soon.

Okay I won't worry lol can't wait for more.

If they broke up why does she still have a pic of him why don't they just admit their feelings. Please update soon.

Awwww how sweet. Great work I loved it!

Stupid computers can't wait for more

What is her lie? Please update soon

What is it with cops taking off their hats? Oh well please update soon!

Grrrrrrrrrrr James you make Me so angry! Can't wait for more.

That's what I was thinking aswell it would be really funny if Tony got blind drunk and fell over his own feet. Please update soon.

Hehe nice one. Can't wait for more.

well atleast Martha's alive can't wait for more

my money's on Jack he'll get blind drunk and fall over and brake his leg okay maybe not but it could be funny can't wait for more

grr you stop there........................................................................... .........................................................................please

ohhhhh Jack and Martha sitting in a tree well you know how it goes can't wait for more

wow that chap was great can't wait for more

ditto

can't wait for more

i wish Mason would go to jail already Jack is so funny when he's drunk can't wait for more