katie343

great please update ASAP

please update soon

poor Jack please update soon

i think i'm gonna cry please update really soon

please tell me there is more coming great work hun

hope there is more coming can't wait

mason you are so evil get lost please update soon

can't wait for more

ohh i hope it's Jack's please update soon

i can't wait for more

please Nicole let Jack live please update really really soon

ahem enough talk of dying is there more coming soon? hint hint and no more death talk it's to sad*cries*

you can't leave it there please update soon pretty please

i think i'm gonna cry=(

yay a sequel can't wait

update soon please can't wait for more

argh how could you leave it there please update ASAP

please post more soon i love it

haha funny Haha that would be funny yes it would be it would also be kinda umm violent

haha funny

i agree please update soon

arghhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh evil callum i hate him *throws rocks at callum and knocks him unconcious* ahh that's better sorry i had to lol it was for jack callum is so evil i can't wait for more please update soon pretty please

awww that was really sweet

ohhh can't wait for more

that was great can't wait for more