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Thanks Sarah I appreciate you reading

That is what I thought as well^^

I totally agree Red and I might have already said this but I want Charlie to wake up and realise that she isnt a teenager & that her behaviour is unprofessional as well.

You make the most breathtaking icons ever! I adore #2, #6, #9 & #11 out of the Josie/Jesse ones. I adore both Miles/Jazz but the 2nd one is my favourite

That is pretty much a good summary of Brax. I haven't watched Home & Away that long and know where near as long as everyone else on this forum, so I don't know much about the character. But from what I seen so far, he engaging in too much criminal activity, but sometimes I think there must be a good Brax somewhere. I think may be he does truly love Charlie but Charlie needs to be careful of Brax's bad side because he can be very manipulative and tries to make a very convincing lair. I agree I think Charlie is setting herself up for a fall and it wont be pretty when it does happen because I cant see her not waking up to how Brax really is. He is manipulative but I do believe that he is actually falling for Charlie.

I too hope it will be good news but I get the sense of bad things to come.. Looking forward to more

I think Marilyn got too attached to the baby and as Nicole was already struggling with the knowledge of being pregnant and jumped at the chance of the baby, she clearly pushed Roo and Angus out of the way when it became clear to her that they had the power to help Nicole make her mind up.

The fact that he works at the shelter does indicate that he has some good aspects to his personality but his criminal side IMO is too dominant for the good aspects to be noticed, Brax is as I have said before a very good liar, he seems to have people wrapped around his little finger but Angelo and Morag seem to be onto him and I so really hope that Brax gets his comeuppance because you cant expect to get away with so much criminal activity forever, there has to come a time when you pay for your actions. Consequences do exist. The only redeeming thing about Brax is the fact that he really wants Casey to do well. I had my doubts before about that but I really do think that he has his best interests at heart.

Thanks for the awesome comments!

Sorry, I read this in the morning and then laptop died so didnt get a chance to comment. I loved Roman line 'truth serum' It was really nice to read!

Whoa he jumped!! I hope he is okay! Looking forward to more

Woah, just caught up with all the chapters. Wow. A lot has happenned since I last read. Grant. I never expected you to bring him in but it was well written & I look forward to more soon x

Just caught up! At Ruby and Casey. They are too funny Aww at Joel &noodles making

Not bad actually, sunny with a hint of a breeze

Aww Disneyland love how the children are so excited. Aden/Belle were great as well! Looking forward to more!

^Aww thanks Laura! I appreciate that

Wow. You actually killed of Angelo. I am still in shock... I still cant believe you did that. I loved the chapter, especially the little Dex/Casey/Aden bit Looking forward to more soon

Ah she kissed Javier. I sense trouble. For some reason I can see Belle ending all alone with no one. I loved the chapter, the dialogue and interaction was perfect. Well done and I look forward to more. xx

I think deep down that Nicole always wanted the baby, I think the reason for her hesistancy was because of the fact that Penn was the 'biological' father and the fact that he caused her so much pain which probably led to her decision. I thi k the decision to give her baby away was a knee jerk reaction because she was scared. She is still really young which is probably why she confided in Marilyn. I do feel sorry for Marilyn but she seems determined to stop Nicole from seeing George which is personally IMO quite unfair but she didn't seem to care that Nicole was struggling as long as she had George which is IMO pretty low.

Thanks to you both for reading and commenting. It means a lot

Thanks Deano. Glad you liked it and enjoyed it. Due to finally coming off the meds that I have been on, means that I can write without feeling off so I will be writing tonight and posting ASAP

Hehe Casey and Dex in this chapter. This makes me smile especially after a stupid trip to hospital Ah Indi is clearly struggling to get some control over the situation but then when you are pregnant...there is not much you can do. It is what it is Again love the Dex/Indi interaction. Looking forward to reading more

Thanks everyone. Amy: I am glad to be back. Red: Pretty much back to normal now but thanks for the comments. Miranda: The truth will be revealed soon I think Again thanks for the comments. I will start writing properly today or tomorrow so normal service will resume

So Brax moved on...I wonder why...it is pretty obvious that he loved her....but then she has been gone for a year & I really want to see his reaction to Olivia/Charlie... aww Casey/Ruby split... Looking forward to more! xx