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lol Thanks guys I'll post another chapter in abit..I think this one will include more Ric and his hand I have already begain notes on my next story,But i wont start it until this one is finished..Its going to be another spoof,The teens being the center of it all..And Peter will be far from the hero,Although he isnt a badguy..He is just useless at his job

Thanks Glad you like it,Pity its not getting as many readers as my other story though,But im going still continue with this one..I'll post another chapter in abit.

Kit just annoyed me in that episode,Fair enough she thought something maybe wrong with the baby and Rachel was happy to help,But im not surprised that Rachel had a go at her for what she said,I used to like Kit until the helicopter crash and i was hoping something would change my mind in the future,But i think i hate her more.

lol Maybe all the psycho's in the bay finally got to his head and he is now killing everyone off so he doesnt have to protect them

Thanks It does seem that way..I wonder why?

Yup,Thats the movie. I havent seen it but there was this Top 100 romance moments or something on a few days ago and i flicked over to see that scene. lol Thanks,I have had alot of people say that.

Thanks,I just have a big imagination and alot of time on my hands. lol Its something rude Not sure if the word is allowed on here,If not i will edit lol The movie connection is Ghost. In the movie the character is on a pottery wheel and the man comes behind,I havent seen the movie but it is a well known scene,Then at the end of the movie the man comes back as a ghost and was never able to say 'I love you' until then,The woman said Ditto..Which is what the man would reply to her when she said it when he was alive.

lol Thanks Cal lol I actually wrote some weird long connection thing,Jack tripping knocking the bookcase over which hit something else which hit something else that led to Jack's death,But I didnt find it funny..Then i remembered the spider The next chapter will have that funny Ric line and my favorite chapter..Then some more tomorrow.

Thanks,I'll put up another chapter later.

Todays episode was great minus the Kim/Kit stuff. Sally's speech was great,Followed by Rics..Best episode in a long while.

lol Thanks I love the Peter Yoo Hoo line I wonder what Jack was ordering

Yeah,I saw that. That was great. Really funny.. I have a few movies that he is in.

I forgot about that scene,It was a shocking one.I still think the first had the best story,It would of been good to have seen Devon Sawa in the others at some point.I would of liked it if he had survived.

I think FD3 is the one that scared me most,Not that it was a scary movie just the deaths,I would of never gone on a sunbed anyway ever,But after seeing FD3 i will never go anywhere near them

Thanks Cal,Im glad you like it. I'll post another chapter later which has a death of a pretty popular character,a big twist and a very funny line from Ric and probably my most favorite scene at the end..Then it maybe alittle slower in the rate i put the chapters up because its caught up to what i am writing now.

I'm still writing it now,I will finish it off trying not to drag it out so much and then see what i am left with. I was the same as you,I dont know where full stops and commars go,So my writing always lacked them..Then people said something or i would read other peoples 'perfect' writing and i started putting in commars and full stops and i think i over do them far too much. lol I asked it to be changed to a 'A' rating. But anyone who has seen FD3 which is a 15 rating should be fine with this..Its mainly thats its the fact that its the person rather than the character..I'll see what it is like after I have finished writing it.

I dont think it is a problem with age,Although maybe I should get the T rated changed to an 18..But then i often think of T meaning about 16. Its the fact that im making a joke of something that is not really the character,But of the person they are played by..Basically its Cassie's tan,How far of a joke can you go when its on a real person. With me i say.. If you know what the person means,whats the problem? And some people do have problems with reading and writing,I have very bad spelling,But it has improved over time..Its text talk I cant stand,As long as the person is trying and I know what they mean there isnt a problem.

lol Im wondering how Peter even became a cop Im also wondering how far is too far when you are joking about something,Making fun of stuff..There is obviously a line,But how do you know if you have crossed it. Just what i wrote last night and carrying on writting now, Its really funny but I cant help but feel it may have gone too far.

Have you seen the size of the cans of beans they have in the diner? Huge! Peter is alittle strange in this story lol I watched this family guy clip a few weeks ago and it had Lois on the bed just staring at nothing and Stewie came running in and was saying 'Lois' over and over and over and over again in a annoying childs voice,Then he switched to saying 'Mum' over and over then 'Mummy' then 'Mum-ma' and aload of other things,It was very funny,I started writing Granddad a few times and i thought i would just over do it

I do have a very strange image now of Ric wearing round glasses,holding a broom and having a white owl on his shoulder and slowly moving his hand down his waist. I'm going to put the next chapter up in about 10mins,Just need to finish something up and then sort it all out.

lol No,I didnt go that far with things Its a funny scene..But while writing it I got the feeling that Matilda was like Hermione,Lucas was like Ron and Ric was like Harry from Harry Potter,That was odd. It had nothing to do with magic at all,Just felt like their characters mixed together..

lol Would it help if i say Matilda and Lucas were there aswell?

lol I havent got the story open at the moment,Im working on my other one.. Im not sure where the chapter cuts off..But I dont think this one has anything to do with his hand or pants. But in the chapter or 2 after that,There is a hilarious scene involving Ric and his hand.. and Colleen.. lol Well after this death coming up I havent written another one yet..Im not sure who is next,But alot of other funny stuff is going to happen in the middle.

Thanks Kirst I will be posting another chapter soon..Which I think will include another death and a VERY funny line from Ric

lol Colleen sleepwalking covered in milkshake I was thinking more along the lines of, People coming to the bay on holiday and not returning..All the media attention on the 'Bay of no return' get the agents to come and investigate. But I cant reveal too much,Dont want to spoil even though I havent got the final idea.