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Last Request - Paolo Nutini. One of the best songs, ever!

This evening (UK) hopefully. That's if Jade can proof it. No pressure, Jadey. I've wrote the next 2 chapters after this chapter.. so I'm happy. It's just this chapter that was doing my head in and stopping me from writing. Now it's much easier. The fic's wrapping up though, it's quite sad. Oh wells, in time for the exams!

I'm not liking Joy. Stupid Joy... The "removing of the bands" was sad. And what made it worse was when Martha saw. She really loves him. Awww. Hopefully Jack is seeing this... Accident!? Who gets hurt? Hopefully Joy. Also, a personal note: I hate birds. They're all stupid and moronically tweety. I woke up at 6.15, just randomly as I turned over, and I heard birds outside my window. I smiled, and thought "awww". But then they wouldn't stop.. and I couldn't sleep... and... grrrr. I'm not impressed. I guess I'll go back now and see if I can have another half an hours sleep with James Morisson on... ideally I'd like to shoot all the flippin' birds.

Guess what!? Nicole's going to update. Tee hee hee! I was speaking to Amber earlier, and I decided "Come on Nicole, today's the day you write that next chapter!" And I did. Oh yes. So tomorrow, after the lovely Jadeth has proofed, I shall post! Exciting, isn't it? Okay, maybe exciting isn't the word.. but I'm just happy that I wrote it and finally finished it. Now it's much easier to write the updates. I'm half way through the next one. But unfortunately because it's been so damn long, you'll have probably forgotten what the hell is going on. I would advise you go through the last chapter. I'll give a brief summary though.. (of what I can remember) Once upon a time, Jack killed/maybe put in jail (is it bad that I don't know? ) Henry's brother. Ever since, Henry has vowed revenge! *mwa ha ha*. He stalked Jack a bit, and then finally he abducted him, after shooting Martha in the stomach of course. 18 months later, Jack came back. Seemed like Martha still loved Jack but... Uh-oh, she has a fiance! A fiance who she secretly doesn't love and is marrying only so that he and his boyfriend can have a happy life together. Unfortunately, Martha's feelings for Jack get in the way of this plan, and makes Martha and Eamon doubt it'll work. It puts strains on their relationship. As Jack is unaware that this is all a cunning plan, he thinks Martha truely loves Eamon, and is very sad. That was.. wierd. My fics are quite dodgy aren't they?

I'd just put the song "Linger" by the Cranberries on, and then I saw you'd updated! How cool. Great chapter!! Aww, it was so sweet in some places, but to incredibly annoying in others. Just tell him how you feel, Martha! Uh-Oh! Next chapter doesn't sound too good. Please update soon!

Aww! That was brilliant! I'm a little bit mad though. I had the final "8888888888" right at the bottom of my screen, and I'd just read "...she was in fact in love with Jack." and I was scrolling down hoping there was more... but there wasn't. Darn it! That was BRILLIANT. Loving this fic. My fave fic. It's great. *strokes fic* Okay, maybe that's going a little too far. Oh, and we all know it's going to be the latter. Martha is sooo going to push him away. Stupid girl. I'm a little worried about this Joy though, Jack seems to like her.

I laughed at the... The women left and Ric smacked Lucas over the head. I could just imagine it.. Great chapter. Great start! Looking forward to more.

I think..... Jack will get hurt. He's the one still in love with her, so it's going to be hard for him. Great chapter! Thanks for updating.

Sorry guys for the lack of updates. I don't think I'll be updating anytime soon... but then again, everytime I say that I seem to update shortly afterwards. So you never know... Anyway, here's a post to explain. Mainly ramble, but.. hey, it is 25 past 11 - on a school night! Rambly post with myexcuses reasons

Awww! That even made ME sad, and I'm not married to her. How awful must it have been for Jack when Martha said she was going on a date. And when she was perfectly happy with the idea of him dating someone else. Poor Jacky... It'll totally backfire on Martha... she'll be so jealous. But then, knowing her, she'll retaliate by getting off with this man, and break Jack's poor little heart... I know, should I just wait and read what happens? lol. Update as soon as you can please!

Ha ha! Coley was right! *elbow digs* Yessssss!! Comon Luc, spill the beans. Matilda and Cassie are a pair of gossips... *shakes head* Great chapter! Update soon please!

Awwww! Jack can be so damn cute. lol Well she's definitely allowing him to get closer. With the "small of her back" and hugging her on the bed. I don't know if Brett did it... I'm quite confused with that. I wonder if Mattie and Cassie's gossip is about Martha and her Jacky-lurve memories? She told them the other day, and if they tell Lucas... Jack said to tell him.... Ooh! Or maybe I'm just thinking too much. Brilliantness is shining from this fic, Amber. Hope you update really soon!

Even I, the brilliant Nicole, did not see that one coming! So great though! I wonder what Jack's going to do... He won't be a happy chappy...