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I can't say great chapter because lily was in it. But it was a good chapter the jack and martha stuff was good up until lily lol but yeah i agree with Amber why couldn't jack just walk away from lily and go with martha that bit sucks. Anyway update soon.

Great oneshot! Was different jack being shy. Was good though , and i like how you ended it makes people fill in the blanks their selves!

You know i love it but seeing as this is my first comment [only started reading last night and finished it now ] i just like to say that i think the storyline has been really good and that it's good it's not just a typical Jack and Martha fic where they are together already it keeps you wondering whether they are going to get together. The latest chapter was good, glad that henry didn't do anything don't really like him and definitely don't like lily/laurie +[any other future interruption although hope there isn't another one but seems like there will be] in a way i am glad martha got drunk because even though it may not have been the best thing to do what jack has seen he can't take back which means he'll be thinking about her even more now he's seen parts of her and less about others and hopefully he'll stick to what he said at the end - the only way he can make sure it doesn't happen again is by not leaving her for some other chick which means he prob won't be going with as many if any from now on and hopefully then can start to become a couple now although i wouldn't put it past you if you didn't make them one yet . Can't wait for next chapter.

I thought this was good. Liked the Geoff/Lucas scenes, only wish would be that there was more of it.

Love the third one.

Zetti i love Final Destination! I wanted to see Hostel 2 aswell but didn't get round it because there were so many other good films out at the time so i guess i'll just have to wait for the dvd or something .

Why on earth do you think Becca was Lil and Averyl was Chrissie? Thanks Lil, Tasha, Emma & Aaron Because Chrissie said could be one reason.

Incase everyone is wondering Becca was written to be Lil and Averyl was written to be Chrissie. Sorry just thought i'd say because i guess no one else would. And that is why Lil here thinks Becca was the best. So sad to see it end but i guess it can't go on forever and that was a great ending!

Good chapter. Hope irene will be okay, although the battery acid thing on Ric's legs is kind of a copy of what Dom did. Update soon.

I think it's worth a go. I mean let's not think about running out of ideas just yet it hasn't even started. I would play, and i'm sure if some other people are bored they'd probably see what's it like and play too, it could have a trial run and then see how it goes from there? Not going to harm anyone giving it a trial run. Of course, it's not up to me whether it has a trial run but i'm just putting my opinion out there.

Love the sig.

Great chapter. Really liking the Luke/Amanda scenes, they were comical! And i agree with Andy, i want to know what they have planned for her although i have a feeling Luke and Amanda will soon be there and if they are not careful they will both be under their thumb too.

Thats one of the best movies ever! Ditto! Jake Gyllenhaal. You chose that over Fantastic four. Oh please people only see it for Johnny Depp not for the actual storyline (which is sh*t ) i am sure they are some people who agree with me. Well I it only made sense to watch it as I've watched the other 2 and just wanted to known how it ends. Oh and trust me I am not one to watch it for Johnny Depp. Theres nothing remotely attractive about that guy. Today I went and watched the Vacancy. Its Okay.....but nothing special, But it made me jump out of your seat once or twice! lmao I thought Vacancy was really good. It you want a full on horror watch Hostel or Hostel 2

Great chapter. Lol That's so Irene running to the aid of a random stranger. Can't wait for more.

You chose that over Fantastic four. Oh please people only see it for Johnny Depp not for the actual storyline (which is sh*t ) i am sure they are some people who agree with me.

Fantastic Four: The rise of the silver surfer. Fantastic film.

here i had a difficult choice of font and colour of the font. if you want me to change any of the two let me know. I love the colouring of this! PLEASE CREDIT ME IF USE!!!! They are so great!

^^ Lol. Great chapters, i just caught up! Loving it. I wonder what will happen next. Will Ric find out?

Great chapter. Sad that Jules isn't in it oh well, guess i'll deal with it lol. I thought it was one of them who did the graffiti? But now they are going all investigative i'm starting to think differently lol. Update soon.

Great chapter. I wonder whether they make detention fun , does Cassie fancy Drew? It seems a little like that. Is Jules going to be in this? Update soon.

Well, i think your wall must be getting pretty jam-packed.

I must say i have been wondering this too, as not a day goes by these days without a routine request.

Great start so far! Very intriguing and descriptive. I wonder who did the graffiti? Can't wait for more. Love that banner, it's so cool!

Lol this was so funny I want more! *stamps feet* Please continue.