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Eeeep!! That last sentence is quite ominous! Anxious for the next chapter!

Great update LOL at the boys' constant bickering. This should be an interesting weekend for them all lol. Update soon x

Hmm interesting story, just got caught up on the whole thing. I wonder what will happen on this road trip. Looking forward ot the next update!

Hmm, I hope Brax is suspect of Heath, I want him to find out that it's been him taking the crop. Unless he jsut doesn't want to believe that his own brother would do that to him. Good stuff update soon.

I had tree chapters to catch up on (lucky me!!) Great stuff, I hate that Angelo caught them out and I'm afraid what will happen when Charlie finds out what's been going on. I'm wondering when Brax will find out about Heath and what exactly Heath is going to do that will screw Brax over. Update soon x

Great update, hope Charlie's alright! Angelo is getting on my nerves with all this interrogation although I can see where he is coming from. Heath will be found out by Brax eventually and I can't see this biding too well for Brodie when it comes out he was hiding the truth. Update soon, really enjoying this story!

Great chapter. Loved Charlie and Bianca's talk at the diner lol. Looking forward to more!

Those last three chapters were great stuff! Really enjoyed the updates. I'm not looking forward to everything coming out about Brax and I'm worried what will happen when he finds out about Heath stealing from the crop. I can't imagine that will go down too well. I hope Casey and Ruby sort things out, they're cute together Anyway, really enjoying this story! Looking forward to the next part. x

Great update, ominous ending. That has me a tad worried. Excited for the next chapter!

Great update. You've got me wondering where you're going to take this couple or whether you're going to take them anywhere at all lol. Looking forward to the next update X

Glad you updated. I don't want Charlie to get back with Joey, please don't tell me that's what's going to happen. I'll still read of course lol. Anyway, Tegan is getting on my nerves, interesting that she and "Jo Jo" are friends lol. I wander what's going to happen with this plan of tegan's. Of course no good will come of it. Update when you can.

Her hun really enjoying this story. I'm only up to chapter 5 at the moment. I hope you keep Chax together. Hmm, I'm assuming it's Joey watching from the shadows? I'll read more to find out...I may even finish the fic today haha. So i finished...some great twists in there for sure!! What's happened with Joey? Did she leave? And I'm wondering what Tegan has planned. Hope you update soon.

Great update. Some hilarious dialogue from Bianca when she was talking to Charlie. I think it would be a good idea for Bianca to get to know more about Heath, especially if she has feelings for him. Looking forward to the next chapter.

Hey hun, I read this fic last week and finished it in a day and joined just so I could comment. Today I finally have posting privileges lol s I wanted to let you know I'm thoroughly enjoying it anc looking forward to the update!

Hey loving this story!! Hate what happened to Charlie. I feel bad for Ruby too. I'm hoping Ruby will be able to forgive her soon and move in with Charlie They could both use the others support. I'm liking this softer side of Heath too. Hmm the baby's name, well, all the name would suit so he could Murphy Scott Braxton, or Scott Murphy Braxton...the list goes on lol that way no one is left out of the equation. Great story!! I’m glad Ruby turned up. I'm really enjoying this fic and loving Heath and Bianca babysitting. LOL at Chax calling haha cute!! Cute scene with Ruby and Aria. So did Heath and Gypsy break up after she found out or was that just a passing fling? loving this story! Oh Heath that was adorable!! I feel bad for Liam though. Oh the drama! I can't help it I have to say big AAAWWWWWW at the Brax/Aria moment. So damned adorable!! Finished! Great story and looking forward to the update. I kind of didn't want Bianca to say yes to Liam, I know that's horrible because I adore Liam but...just but hehe. Librarian Edit: Merged all five posts into one big post.