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Aww I loved this fic!! Really well done hun! I've enjoyed every chapter! Could there be a sequel...maybe??

Ooh that was a great update!! Damn the storm, this should prove interesting though hahaha. Looking forward to the next chapter!!

Aww they've all been left heartbroken! Is Brax going to turn himself in to the cops? Looking forward to the next capter!

Sorry haven't commented lately. Still reading and enjoying this story very much. please update soon x

Great update. I'm wondering what will happen with Jacob now that Angelo has died. They shouldn't leave him with Nicole, she's not related to him. But if they put him in foster care, that would be horrible. Loved the Charlie/Ruby part at the end. Looking forward to teh next update!

Loved the two chapters you posted. Was shocked that Tegan had hit Charlie and left her but at least it was an accident and not on purpose. The pranks were pretty awesome haha. I wonder what the girls have ip their sleeves!! Looking forward to more!

Great chapter. This story has been amazing. I wonder, could there be a sequel?? Looking forward to the rest of it. Update soon please!

Great update! Hmm I'm guessing it's Angelo who got shot but a part of me is saying Casey. Ok update soon please!! Great story!

Great couple of updates! Grr Angelo is annoying me! I hope Ruby is back safe soon and then they can work on getting Jacob back! Update soon please x

OMG that was a really great one piece! I wish you'd continue but I guess leaving it like that is a great way of ending things. It juxtaposes with the fact that Charlie's life as Charlie is over. Awww seriously, written beautifully!!

I'm so gald Morag has come to help! If anyone can clear this up it is definitely her!! OMG who the heck was that in the car and why'd he take Ruby? Charlie is going to be devastated when she finds out, how much more can she handle; having both her children taken from her is going to be tough!! Great update, more soon please!

Those two chapters were great! I know Charlie is hurting but I hope she comes around soon, she really needs someone with her. Can I say that Angelo deserves a flykick to the head and then some! This is just awful!

OMG that was utterly heartbreaking!!! Bloody Angelo why the eff did he call child services I thought he'd only call the cops! I'm so angry at him, couldn't he keep his mouth shut! Yeah I get that part of it is Brax's fault but couldn't Angelo just trust that it was coming to na end. I'm really nervous to see what happens in the next chapter. Please update soon xx

Well I'm glad Brax found out about what Tegan did but now i'm worried about what she might do now that seh knows Charlie told. Looking forward to the next update x

Lovely chapter. I'm lking this tolerance Heath and Liam have going on. Oh I hope all is good with the baby. Update soon please

Great two chapters. I hope Angelo isn't stupid enough to call the police at this point. He should know if the drugs get taken then no deal with Hammer will go down and things will really go to sh**.

Glad they got that sorted out. Great update. More soon please!

Sorry to hear you were sick and glad you managed an update. I hope Chax can get back on track although I'm still worried Tegan is plotting something with Joey.

Loved this chapter!! Loved the Ruby Brax bit at the end. Yes Brax rethink handing yourself in!!

Awww I like the name Jacob, very cute!! Brax is making promises that are going to be broken. If he's going to hand himself in he'll be shipped off to gaol real soon This is going to be hard on Charlie. Great update, more please

Ah so Bianca hasn't realised that Heath chickened out at the last second. Is he hiding from shame? Poor Liam, that must be painful!! Update soon please!

Good update Baby's on the way Brax knows about the crop What will happen next!! update soon please!

Those last three chapters were great!! I'm worried someone is going to find the stash of drugs at Ruby's (but either way I sense sh** hitting the fan real soon)

Great chapter! Can't believe Heath chickened out like that! Hope they're all going to be ok. Update when you can x