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  1. Danni, I know I have been so bad with commenting on each chapter of this amazing fic, but I have read each and every chapter and each chapter has just been so great. You are an amazing writer and it shows. I loved how you ended it, still with the reminders of Ruby but also showing that they can move on with their lives. I really can't say how much I have enjoyed reading this. Thank you so much for writing this!

  2. Wow Danni, another story on the go!

    It's great so far; I feel so sorry for Ruby been so sick :(

    Charlie and Brax :wub: love them!

    I can understand why Brax is a bit resistant to the idea of Charlie having a baby with Grant, but it might be the only way to have a certain match. I can understand why Charlie is determined to have a baby with him, I just hope she gets the support she will need.

    Great writing Danni, :D

  3. Just read this from the beginning.

    How amazing??? I love it!

    I feel so sorry for Charlie: Having to deal with the death of Lily, the loss of her marriage and the fact that the father of her son doesn't want to do anything to help her through any of the emotions! I hope Charlie has some good fortune coming her way, Ie Brax :wub: these two obviously have a connection already and they have shown that they are what each other needs at this moment in time :wub:

    Connor is just so adorable! you write kids so cute in any fic you do! I love how he loves his haribo and how he calls Brax Daryll! it made me chuckle when he made Charlie sign her name on a piece of paper so she couldn't go back on her word :lol:

    Angelo: don't even get me started! I can't believe he has little time for his son! I get that he is grieving, but to ignore his son, BLAME his son for the death of his daughter and then tell Connor that he can't talk to the one man who is actually being a father-figure to him??? nah, he can go do one! ;angry:

    Poor Ruby, I hope she and Charlie can get back to a relationship soon and one that is strong. Looks like she and Romeo may become 'more than friends' and I wonder if she is actually going to go through with the adoption to Tony and Rachel; for Tony and Rachel it would be nice, but I can see where Charlie's arguement came in. Hopefully Ruby won't make a mistake.

    Update again soon Danni, I'm hooked! :D

  4. Aww, thanks for the nod in the thing you put at the beginning of each update! Cheeky!

    Two fab updates Danni; loved them. The twins are so cute and hilarious! they should have their own comedic act!

    Where do babies come from? Why have you got scribbles on your arms? What's my baby brother called? -SO sweet!

    Awkward moment there when Charlie was asked about giving the twins a baby brother. Felt sorry for Charlie :(

    Xavier and Rubvy's little bit there was sweet; a cute little family in the making there!

    Update soon Danni! This is amazing writing here! :D

  5. Danni! I can't believe how many updates I have missed! Has to be nearly 50 chapters worth, if not more!

    All I can say is WOW!

    The writing is fantastic and I have loved how Charlie and Brax have grown so much in their relationship together and how cute the twins are and of course little Jacob.

    I have so many parts of each chapter that I like -ranging from the funny to the cute to the dramatic to the sad.

    A few of them are: Riley and Paige with the bridesmaids dresses, Charlie seeing an engagement ring and thinking it was hers, Charlie saying how Ruby is 23 and getting married before she was and Brax adding 'she can make you a grandma when you're still in your thirties', the whole Ryan drama, keeping the suspense going as to who was Bella's dad.

    Its so nice to read a Charlie and Brax fic seeing as though we can no longer enjoy them on screen :(

    Thank you Danni, this is an awesome fic and I will be commenting more regularlary -on the plus side of missing so much, I had loads to read and keep me entertained :D

  6. Chapter 45 - So it was for Brax, not Charlie....that was a shock lol. I hope it makes Brax see that he is causing a huge rift between him and his family. I know he is hurting, but he isn't going the right way to deal with it. Charlie was right in giving him an ultimatum, something that he had needed, just hope he wakes up and smells his ways. Ruby was so cheeky in this chapter! LOVE it :D So glad Charlie has a friend like Bianca to help her, she wouldn't have anyone to unload her feelings onto if she didn't.

    Chapter 46 -Ruby and Matt...I do like these two, its definitely full of cheek and new love. Jacob, bless him! :( only wanting mummy, which is understandable, but Brax will be crushed, but then again, he only has himself to blame!

    Update again soon please Danni, these were amazing! :D

  7. Ruby and Matt's bit added the comic relief to these chapters -the much needed I might add. Sounds like something is going to happen between these two.....

    Intense or what?? Brax really needs to wake up and see his actions are tearing him and Charlie apart; drinking whilst looking after the twins and leaving Riley to cry her heart out when she has colic and a dirty nappy- if DOCS got wind of that he'd have more than Charlie shouting at him. I feel so sorry for Jacob, he knows his mummy is upset and he knows his mummy and daddy are shouting at each other! I don't blame him for been scared of Brax. Cheryl doesn't seem to be helping matters either; she should know better, but then again, it is Cheryl. Bianca seems to be the only other person (other than Ruby) who is helping Charlie and offering her the support she needs. I hope Charlie packing her bags makes Brax see what he is doing is pathetic and stupid; I know his little brother is dead, but at the same time, he has his two very young daughters to think about.

    Update again soon please Danni, these were amazing! :D

  8. Oh my god Danni! I've missed loads! So so sorry!

    Chapter 35 -Can't believe its Casey! Dead! poor Brax. Liked the conversation between Charlie and Ruby. Can't believe Cheryl isn't into believing Brax

    Chapter 36- I agree with what Bianca said about pity sex not been the best thing to do when they haven't had sex for seven months......and had to :lol: at her 'born again virgin' comment. I hope nothing happens between Brax and Bianca as he isn't getting any and she isn't getting any.... little worried about that. I don't think Charlie could fogive Brax and Bianca if they did do anything.....

    Chapter 37 -I can't believe Brax doesn't want to help. I get that his brother has died, but he can't really take this attitude. Jacob is so cute :wub: and I liked Charlie and Bianca's talk

    Chapter 38 -Charlie not wanting to go to the funeral but wanting and been supportive to Brax is the best she can do; Brax is been a little childish there, he has to understand that, even though Casey is his brother, he is the man who raped her daughter, that's gonna be hard for her. Cheryl, bless her :( and Brax with the drink again; not good!

    Chapter 39 -Cheryl shouldn't be encouraging Brax to drink away his problems; the more he drinks, the more Charlie is going to not let him near his girls, and i'm with Charlie when she told Cheryl that she couldn't see the girls. Ruby and Xave....work it out, you can do both! but, if your minds are made up then, that's it. Charlie and Bianca's wee little bit was nice

    Chapter 40 -Brax seriously! leave the drink alone, Charlie will go and you'll loose more than your brother: your kids will go. Jacob helping Charlie bath the girls: SO cute! Jacob is so adorable! I feel so sorry for Charlie; I just want to give her a hug!

    Chapter 41 -Ruby's carrer is deffo going great isn't it? Interviews and all! Brax's first attempts at getting back into Charlie's good books are sweet, but he still has a long long way to go. Charlie no way needed that from him :angry:

    All have been FAB Danni, so intense and everything! update again soon please :D

  9. :o I've missed so many amazing updates! I'm really really sorry! :(

    I've loved all of them, and Ruby and Jacob's game playing was so sweet; its nice that she has the time for her family, its a shame she is having to find the time because both her career and her family are important to her.

    Jacob has definitely got cuter with each chapter, he sounds so adorable and could just keep a smile on anyone's face :wub:

    :rolleyes: oh Colleen; you'll never ever change will you??? kinda glad it was her to tell and not Xavier

    keep up the fantastic writing Danni, I'm really enjoying this and look forward to your updates (even though I'm slacking with the comments! :lol: )

  10. Danni! don't kill me coz I missed an update...... okay, four updates :ph34r:

    How great were they? Seriously; I read these on my lunch break, I get ligged out on my car with ma drink and read them, then forget to comment.

    Too many things to say what I loved, you know I loved it all!

    I do feel for Xavier, but at the same time, he shouldn't tell Ruby to choose; singing and Xavier are apart of her life, she just needs time to figure out how to manage both

    Chax continue to be :wub:

    Jacob -I'm gonna pinch him :lol: (I mean in this time..........)

    And the twins :wub:

    Update again soon Danni! :D

  11. Amazing updates Danni! :D

    I'm so glad Charlie told Brax how she felt about the hysterectomy; and how she felt cheated because she couldn't bottle it up any more, and Brax's response to that was so :wub: The gifts were lovely and at least marriage isn't out of the question. I feel sorry for Xavier and hope Ruby realises that Xavier is still there, I know her career is kicking off but she'll find she'll loose those she can trust and fall in with those who she can't. Bianca is such a great friend, helping Charlie when and where she can. Colleen's interaction with Charlie :rolleyes: she never changes! Jacob is just amazingly cute! wanting to play pirates at 3am bless him!

    Update again soon Danni :D

  12. Loved this Danni!

    Knew Brax didn't mean to push passed Charlie, he could no way be like that. Glad that Bianca was there to help Charlie before Brax got back, it has to be hard on her; still recovering from the surgery and having a young child and newborns to look after. But at least now Brax is getting himself involved more with the twins. When Brax was able to stop Riley from crying, that made me howl! :lol: bless, so funny! Jacob as ever is just so adorable, I reall am gonna pinch him.....hehe

    Update again soon Danni :D

  13. Wow Danni!

    Brax; seriously, man up, pull yourself together and give Charlie a hand! She need sleep and a lot of help! although, his awesamazing did make me :lol:

    Poor Xav :( Waiting for Ruby

    I hope that Brax pushing passed Charlie WAS drunken annoyance and nothing else; poor girl, she seems so unhappy about the hysterectomy and with it still hurting :(

    Jacob saying he no heavy was adorable :wub:

    Update again soon please Danni :D

  14. Amazing updates Danni!

    :wub: Brax buying the girls their birthstones, how sweet! oooh, and looking at the rings.....Do I hear the distant sound of wedding bells????? Here's hoping!

    Brax, Charlie, Jacob, Paige and Riley are such a sweet little family! :wub: (and Ruby of course....)

    Brax will get the hang of the babies and routines soon enough, bless him!

    Update again soon please Danni! Amazing writing as usual! :D

  15. Paige and Riley! :wub: gorgeous! Pause for a moment to let the image of Charlie, Brax and the girls to settle :wub:

    Can't believe the doctor wouldn't let Brax make the decision! <_< I get its supposed to be next of kin, but in a life-death situation like that could have been, surely Brax would have been able to make the decision!

    at least Charlie is all right, just a lot sore, but at least she can hold her girls! :wub:

    Fab update Danni, Can't wait for the next one! :D

  16. Danni! Sorry to hear about your papa. my condolence to you and your family xx

    Fab update!

    Poor Charlie for been alone when she went into labour, must have been scary!

    I had to laugh at Xavier's reaction to having his hand held

    Hopefully Brax gets there in time, he can't miss the birth of his babies! Charlie will kill him!

    Lil Jacob :( bless him.

    can't wait for the next one Danni :)

  17. Another great update Danni!

    Loved how Brax and Bianca did the nursery, even Brax telling Charlie not to paint!

    So, Bianca's little persuasion of marriage to Brax hasn't worked??? I don't think she could have been any more subtle!

    I loved their chat though, its nice that they are great friends and love Charlie, and I love that Bianca is the surrogate auntie to the growing brood.

    The room sounds lush :wub:

    I hope its good news about the adoption!

    Update again soon please Danni :D

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