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KirstyEkua

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  1. Harry - 14 Marilyn - 17 Rachel - 51 Romeo - 6 Tony - 12
  2. Harry - 13 Marilyn - 18 Rachel - 50 Romeo - 7 Tony - 12
  3. Harry - 14 Marilyn - 20 Miles - 0 Rachel - 47 Romeo - 7 Tony - 12 Miles is out
  4. Harry - 14 Marilyn - 20 Miles - 2 Rachel - 45 Romeo - 7 Tony - 12
  5. Harry - 14 Marilyn - 21 Miles - 4 Rachel - 43 Romeo - 7 Tony - 11
  6. Harry - 13 Charlie - 1 Marilyn - 21 Miles - 5 Rachel - 42 Romeo - 7 Tony - 11
  7. Harry - 13 Charlie - 3 Marilyn - 21 Miles - 5 Rachel - 40 Romeo - 7 Tony - 11
  8. Harry - 11 Charlie - 5 Marilyn - 21 Miles - 5 Rachel - 40 Romeo - 7 Tony - 11
  9. Harry - 11 Charlie - 7 Marilyn - 21 Miles - 5 Rachel - 39 Romeo - 7 Tony - 10
  10. Harry - 11 Charlie - 9 Marilyn - 21 Miles - 5 Rachel - 38 Romeo - 7 Tony - 9
  11. Harry - 10 Charlie - 11 Marilyn - 21 Miles - 5 Rachel - 37 Romeo - 7 Tony - 9
  12. Harry - 9 Charlie - 13 Marilyn - 21 Miles - 5 Rachel - 37 Romeo - 7 Tony - 8
  13. Harry - 9 Charlie - 15 Marilyn - 21 Miles - 5 Rachel - 36 Romeo - 7 Tony - 7
  14. Harry - 7 Charlie - 17 Marilyn - 21 Miles - 5 Rachel - 36 Romeo - 7 Tony - 7
  15. Harry - 7 Charlie - 19 Marilyn - 21 Miles - 5 Rachel - 35 Romeo - 7 Tony - 6
  16. Harry - 6 Charlie - 21 Marilyn - 21 Miles - 5 Rachel - 34 Romeo - 7 Tony - 6
  17. Harry - 6 Charlie - 23 Marilyn - 21 Miles - 5 Rachel - 32 Romeo - 7 Tony - 6
  18. Harry - 6 Charlie - 25 Marilyn - 21 Miles - 5 Rachel - 30 Romeo - 7 Tony - 6
  19. Harry - 6 Charlie - 27 Marilyn - 21 Miles - 5 Rachel - 29 Romeo - 7 Tony - 5
  20. Harry - 6 Charlie - 29 Marilyn - 20 Miles - 5 Rachel - 28 Romeo - 7 Tony - 5
  21. Harry - 6 Charlie - 30 Marilyn - 21 Miles - 5 Rachel - 26 Romeo - 7 Tony - 5
  22. Eeeek Laura this is getting so exciting!!! I loved the stuff with Charlie and Angelo; i am trying to figure out what Angelo is up too becasue he is acting really suss and i suspect when Charlie finds out it's not going to be pretty! I loved the little one liners from Belle and Aden. They were funny and i thought you captured their charatcers really well. Angelo is not the best liar though; it's almost like he wants to get caught! I'm really intrigued as to what he is up too and i wonder what the consquences will be for his engagement to Charlie. He's already going against her wishes by telling people about them and that's not exactly a good start. And Oh.My.God. The stuff with Rachel and the mystery patient I badly want to believe it's Tony but given the circumstances Rachel can be forgiven for mistaking someone else for him. You wrote her emotions so well, from her initial shock and confusion and then her complete emotional breakdown (i guess you could call it that?). I don't like this Mr Wallis although i understand why he had to call security. She is acting irrationally but if it is Tony then of course she'd be beside herself and i love how she just didn't care that Mr Wallis standing with her and just threw herself at 'Tony.' I love the little bits of detail she remembered, like his scar I so hope it is him otherwise i really fear for Rachel's mental health. It's really serious for poor Rachel. It's heart breaking for her. Even if it is Tony how is she going to convince people? No one is going to believe her and i don't blame them either. I can't wait for more!!
  23. Another fantastic chapter I really liked the conversation between Elijah and the Bishop. I'm glad he made Eliajh realise that what happened to Rachel wasn't his fault and i guess deep down he didn't really want to leave the Church. It's a shame he felt so guilty that it drove him to reconsider his whole belief system but i like you gave him his own little story and it worked really well. It must be awful to be in that position and i'm sure it happens every day to people like Elijah. What made it even better was that you clearly know what you are taking about and it was really clear what the Bishop was saying. I am warming to Mr Wallis He was pretty understanding of Rachel and it was very good of him to give her a second chance despite her little breakdown (i guess you could call it that?). I think she is trying so sad to keep everything together and tell herself this is something she has to do when in reality i don't think she is ready Her emotions seem to be all over the place. I like how you have her trying to be all strong but you can tell she is just falling apart inside. Can't wait for more.
  24. Another amazing update, yey At first it seemd like Rachel was going to be fine and it seemed like a great opportunity for her to have something new to focus on - but now i think maybe she went back to work too soon. She seemed really excited and positive but as soon as the doctor started talking about the patient they were treating she seemed to panic a little. I know it must have reminded her of Tony but i guess that's something she needs to try and overcome. It was sad she couldn't cope and ended up crying - i hope this doesn't set her back again. Again you captured her emotions really well, i like how she went from being a little nervous and excited, happy and then sad and just broken really. I guess this patient they're talking about will bring back memories for her I'm a little intrigued as to who he is too. It was sweet she was trying so hard to be nice and sound all excited. And i like how she asked lots of questions, that's so like her As for Angelo - it's all very interesting! I have no idea what he's up too but it doesn't sound good at all! I hope he gets into serious trouble for whatever it is he is doing. And brining Charlie into it, not very nice of him at all! Can't wait for more.
  25. Another amazing chapter Poor Elijah blaming himself for what Rachel did. It must really be affecting him if he's decided to give up his job, well, i guess what he does is more a way of life than a job, so yeah, it must be devastating for him to think he's failed His outburst was brilliantly written and i am intrigued as to what will happen with him next. Hopefully Leah will help him understand he wasn't to blame in any way. It's great Rachel is taking a step forward and going back to work but i'm slightly worried she's taking on too much. But i understand why she doesn't want to go back to her old job. Maybe a new place will be better for her and help her start to move on. I hope she's going to be ok. I loved the talk with Leah; you've written their friendship so well It's really sweet Leah was worried she'd forget about her, bless. Oh God Lucas is really breaking dow It's so awful for him. I love how you've written it totally from his perspective though and how he is handling things so differently to everyone else. It's refreshing to see. I hope he reaches out to someone soon; before it's too late and he ends up regreting everything he's said and done. It was lovely how Jack and Martha went to the city with Rachel It's good she has something to focus on and to keep her busy. It's sweet how you could tell they were worried about her without either of them actually saying it. Rachel seemed nervous which i guess is to be expected. Can't wait for more!
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