sephy

Right, so I have finally finished reading the whole of this fic, and wow! There are absolutely no words to describe just how fantastically you write. Every single word of dialogue is perfectly suited to the character you write it for, and every single word for description makes it so easy to visualise. No one has managed, in my opinion, to write in such a brilliant balance as you so that niether gets boring. Also, the different genres, from fluff to angst, to drama and suspence to racy fluff, it's all great. Honestly, I cannot find the find the words right now to explain what I mean. I'm not a writer like you, lol. One thing that I love about this fic is the continuity of certain things from previous ones, such as Aden's nightmares and the charm bracelet. The first is just so moving, and I loved how it came to a climax in this fic. Perfect! The latter has got to be the sweetest, most romantic thing ever! Where on Earth did you get such an idea? It's so original and so Adelle! Once again, brilliant! Krissy, her addition has just got me squealing nonstop through the chapters. The name, reasoning behind it, and just her were so beautiful! I can visualise her as a gorgeous Adelle baby. She's probably the only Adelle baby girl I've read about who's interaction with Aden makes my cheeks ache from smiling! They are a cute couple, lol. There is so much more I can say, but I don't think I'll bore you with it all. Just want to say that you are, my, favourite author of all fanfiction, and the day this fic ends will be a sad one. I think, and hope, that you mentioned you were going to do another fic, but not a sequel. Well, whatever it is, I am definitely in to read it. Anyway, I do hope you post more soon, so that I can add more of my ramblings to it, lol. And now, I am going to reread this fic because I love it that much!

Gosh. I still cannot get over the fact that he is so ill. Poor little Beau. I really hope what Belle said at the end is true and that Beau's alright. Loved Beau talking about the cake, and then to Roman about neing brave. Too cute Just one question, and this isn't a criticism or anything cos it's your fic and it's brillant, but just wondering if we'll see Uncle Aden and Meg from Plain Sailing soon? They were a cute pair, lol. With that said, I cannot wait for more at all.

Oh. Oh my. That was an ending that I will definitely be thinking about in my dreams tonight. With me in Belle's place, of course. The descriptions you include along with the dialogue are a one of a kind. There are some brilliant writers on this site, but the way you write is probably above them all. I utterly love it cos I can have these thoughts about Aden, lol. I'm glad him and Justin are ok. I have to admit that I'm up to chapter 51 so Aden's life hangs in balance, but I wouldn't be able to sleep until I found out if he were okay. And I'm so glad I did Btw, I know this is in the wrong place, but I've tried to PM you but I think your inbox is full or something of the like. I just thought you would like to know that there are many people out there who seem to love your fic, especially one, who seems to be 'borrowing' a lot of your ideas. I know it's a bit haste and rude of me to post this here randomly, especially at my first comment on this fic, but I, personally, hate plagarism, and I'm sure that after all the hard work and thought you put into your work, you would like to know. Brilliant work though, and I'll keep reading in order now, lol. (Sorry for the paragraph writing. My enter key has broke.)

Wow. That was just... Wow. Absolutely brilliant! Having to tell a child, or in Aden's case, two children, that their mother's passed on must be the hardest thing in the world, and you did it amazingly. I could feel almost every single pain and emotion in the fic. I have to say that this is probably the saddest and greatest scene/fic I've read with one half of Adelle dying. Well done!

Oh, gosh. I'm crying. How could you do that to an innocent little boy? I know he's an OC but I already love him. Please, please, please make sure he's alright Other than that, lovec the chapter. Beau is suh a sweetheart. Too adorable. Hope you don't keep us waiting for more for long.

I've spent the last couple of days reading Plain Sailing, and now this, and I've got to say that Beau has got to be the most perfect and gorgeous Adelle baby ever. I love his relationship with Aden and Belle, though mainly Aden. Too cute. This chapter, however, I was just waiting for the bad news. I fear it was going to be something like cancer from when his knees had been hurting and his nosebleed. But great way of building it all up, and I was still shocked at with ending! Hope you update soon!!!

I just read all of Unlucky yesterday and finally got hte time to read this. I didn't have an account before, but I knew that as soon as I made one, I would comment on this story first. I absolutely love it. I love the way that you capture the characters and the situations. I love the way you create the atmosphere and the way that you make it all work and still keep it realistic. The way you've developed the characters is magnificent. I've practically fallen for your Aden, and that's saying something because I love the original one! This one is just so perfect. Not to mention rich too! Please keep going. I read that you were going to do another sequel to this. I can't believe that you've alredy planned that out before finishing this one, but I will be here to read them all. I will try to leave a comment when I can, but because I have to use the family computer, if I log on, I might forget t log off and I don't want others using my account. But I will be reading! Looking forward to your next update. Sephy.