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  1. Aww I liked the happy Tachel tonight. Their dancing left a lot to be desired though! I did like that they were slow dancing to a quick song, it looked like Gina woke Tony up when she came over to them and they were all snuggled up holding hands Actually Tony looked quite drunk at certain times in the episode haha! And I did NOT miss the bum touch Rachel, naughty girl!
  2. Fantastic update Kirsty! I've spent this whole fic being wary of Mark and getting an uneasy feeling everytime he's in the scene, I'd decided I didn't like him and then you go and make me feel guilty by the revelation that he was abused as a child It makes it totally understandable why Rachel puts up with his attitude towards her, he's really really horrible and treats her like she's his possession. However I've noticed that she does stand up to him and I liked how she caught him out and managed to score personal training sessions with Tony Nicely done Rachel Seeing as we saw Rachel get into the car perfectly fine, we know she's lying to Tony about falling down the stairs at the restaurant, I think I know what's going on but I'm too afraid to say it I just love the way you're developing this huge connection between Rachel and Tony, they've got such intense chemistry and I love the contrast of how amazingly sweet Tony is compared to Mark. Rachel is a completely different character around him, so relaxed and care-free and you write that really well. But I don't want them to just be friends! Tony's reaction when Rachel pushed him away was so sad and I think Rachel felt it to. Interesting first chapter, I'm concerned about who Emily is talking about, I hope it's not who I think it is, interested to see her involvement. Also really intrigued as to what Dan's issue is! I loved this paragraph, such a beautiful metaphor. Poor Rachel, she's totally trapped Please update sooooon!
  3. Thank you so much
  4. Oh no poor Rachel That must have been heartbreaking to hear, can't wait to see how she reacts when he explains it. I agree with RR, keeping his Mum's death is only going to make Tony worse. He's not having a good time at the minute is he? Please update soon!
  5. Yay you updated! Really sweet chapter, loved the Tachel, Tony's so perfect Poor Rachel worrying she's going to get PND again, I love it. Update soon!
  6. I've got quite a specific request for an av If anyone's up for a challenge could they PM me, I would be so grateful Thank you!!!!
  7. I was considering writing this in aus discussion but thought the non Tachel people might get sick of my fluffy post. It is sooo nice to see Rachel & Tony having such a normal, realistic storyline and seeing them both totally besotted by Harry. Of course I'd like them to have a bit more of an exciting storyline soon but they've had an eventful year and a half and I think they deserve the break I love seeing Rachel enjoying Harry and playing with him, teaching him to stand up And Tony asking if he's grown since this morning trying to distract Rachel knows him better than that! I feel so bad for Tony, he loves his job and I think he feels guilty because he's running it for Kit and Maddie. It's quite sweet how Rachel's trying to do everything she can to help keep it going for him.
  8. Good chapter, nice to see Leah have some happiness, I wish Lucas would forgive Hugo he's already punished him enough. So glad Tony's going to be ok but I'm slightly worried what he's going to say to Rachel to shock her in the next chapter, he's not going to call her Beth or anything is he Look forward to the next chapter!
  9. That was a really good chapter I feel sorry for Hugo poor guy! So so glad Tony is going to be ok, I'm looking forward to Rachel and Tony talking, I wonder if he'll tell her about Beth, might be interesting! Looking forward to the next update!
  10. Woooah what a cliffhanger, you wrote it so well! Tony - you better come back to Rachel!! You don't want Beth she's boring
  11. I'm not that much of a Changelo fan but I am in this story Your writing is really good, I like all the short sentences of dialogue and I'm glad Ruby doesn't believe Grant
  12. Oh no that preview doesn't sound good I really hope Tony's going to be ok, that chapter was amazing so full of action and I was holding my breath the whole way through. I loved the little scene between Rachel and Tony where she was begging him to wake up, so sad Can't wait for your next update!
  13. My interpretation of it (though I could be wrong) was that Mark was raping Rachel or at least Rachel was letting him sleep with her because she was too weak to stop him. He definetely seems to have these two personas, one where he's sweet and cares for her and the other where he takes advantage of her and abuses her. And for him to want to sleep with her while she's ill with the flu is sick. This story is absolutely amazing Kirsty, you're handling it so sensitively, I love how the chapters are so long, not just because it means I get to read more of your fic but also because it really gives me a chance to get into the story. My heart absolutely breaks for Rachel. It's so sad to see her having so much fun with her work knowing what she's facing at home. And it's also really sad to see how lovely Tony's treating her and how happy he's making her, yet she's putting up with all that abuse from Mark. I loved the scene between Leah and Tony....Leah is such a good best friend, looking out for Rachel and I totally agree with her, she deserves a man like Tony Bless him, I love how he's there for her, Rachel being distracted when he talked about his stitches made me laugh haha! And seeing her all rambling and embarassed reminded me of how nervous Tony was when he asked her out on a date. I'd love to see how Tony acts being around Rachel and Mark at the party - and how Rachel acts to after their kiss! That scene on the pier was just heartbreaking I presume Mark had been hitting her again and she'd run out just to escape. Rachel's complete acceptance of what Mark does to the point where she just lets him do it rather than trying to fight it off gives me the impression this has been going on for a long time and Rachel 'knows best' how to handle him and make it easier for herself. I'm so pleased Tony was there to give her some comfort although I was DESPERATE for her to tell him the truth about what had happened, although he's felt the bump on her cheek now so hopefully not before long he'll put two and two together. That kiss Poor Tony, he's going to feel so rejected now and he's not going to know that Rachel does actually like him. I hope Rachel's able to see how much better a life she could have with Tony and leaves Mark, although I don't think it's going to be that easy! Emily intrigues me. I liked how Rachel wanted to sit down and talk about her rather than going by the statistics on her notes, very doctor-y! Well at least how they should be anyway. Emily freaking out when Rachel mentioned her boyfriend being in PR and then noticing the bruises and plasters on her makes me think Emily knows what's going on and has maybe even been a victim of it herself. Hopefully she'll be able to support Rachel and get her help in some way. And finally, I nearly forgot to mention the little Leah/Dan scene. It was nice to have a little distraction from the raw emotions going on with Rachel's storylines, it seems Leah doesn't have an idea that they really can't afford it?? Interesting to see where this is going.. Update soon pleeease!
  14. Charlene (TachelHolden) found a link that she thought you might all like to see of Amy in another show years ago, she played a pregnant hippie it's quite funny (with a much more realistic bump than she had with Harry!) http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_WeHD7nS1BY
  15. Ahhhh you've got a new fic! Yay Wow Kirsty such a brilliant start. I liked how there was loads going on and you kept jumping from scene to scene, there's a lot of unanswered questions and yaaay Dan's alive! Hehe. The beginning paragraph was just amazing. I didn't know who Rachel was talking about or what she was talking about. I'm presuming it might have something to do with Mark - there's something I don't like about him at all. It seems that you've hinted towards him abusing Rachel although I'm not sure whether it's physical or emotional. He seems to have nice sides to him also so I'm interested to know why he treats Rachel the way he does - is it just the stress of the job? I like that Leah is suspicious, no-one knows you like your best friend!!! Although I guess Dan is right for not letting her throw accusations out, hopefully she'll keep an eye on Rachel. I really liked the scene where she bumped into Tony, she's obviously on edge to have reacted that way for spilling the coffee so it was nice to see that she had someone looking out for her, a new friendship or maybe something more I really like how you've gotten into Rachel's head and clearly explained how she's feeling throughout each chapter. The most poignant line for me was "Anyways she should have known. It was all her fault." Seems that Mark's manipulated her mind enough for her to believe that she deserves however he's treating her, I'm interested to know a bit more about this, when it started etc and for things to become clearer. Interesting last paragraph with Emily seeing Mark Carlton and her reaction. I presume this is Rachel's Mark. She might have a few things to tell Rachel so I'm looking forward to their meeting although I guess she doesn't know that Rachel is Mark's girlfriend yet? Really looking forward to the next chapter. You said you were going to start a new fic and you haven't disappointed This is a lot more dark than your last one but has so much potential and I'm looking forward to reading more.
  16. Aww wooow so much going on in that chapter Kirsty it was brilliant! I really liked how you switched back to what had happened earlier in the day, it was a nice change of structure and all the way through had me questioning whether Martha was ok and what was going on. I really like Leah and Rachel's chat, it was good that Leah told her and I liked how you showed Rachel was torn between her best friend and her brother, trying to stay supportive of Leah but also ensure her brother wasn't hurt. Rachel's explanation of her and Tony's sex life post baby was very realistic in terms of how women see themselves so that was a nice little touch! Nice to see Rachel talk about how she was able to love Tony more than anything post Kim and how she pointed out that Leah was able to love Dan after Vinnie. I also liked the chat between Hugo and Tony. Seems Hugo isn't too bothered either way so hopefully Leah will choose Brad otherwise that will make the situation more complicated! It's sad how Rachel's beating herself up over Martha but I think I'd feel the same in her situation. Hopefully she'll be ok because otherwise it could affect Rachel for a long time I think. Looking forward to the next update. It's sad that this one is ending but I'm looking forward to seeing what you write about next!
  17. Woooah that was an amazing chapter, you wrote that really really well poor Tony I'm looking forward to seeing Rachel's response when she finds out what happened. The plot follow up was interesting to read, there were so many clues in there I didn't even pick up on! Looking forward to the next update!
  18. Was not expecting Tony!!! Oh dear poor Rachel and on their anniversary! She'll be at home with a dinner cooked waiting for him and he's off trying to kill his Dad. Brilliant shock there, he was acting a bit suspicious a couple of chapters back but I never expected him. Looking forward to the next chapter, please update soon
  19. That was so funny Char!! Gooo Tony, so wish that happened on the show! Stupid Robert insulting HotDad! Loved the little Tachel fluff Update soon
  20. This is a really, really good start. You've written it so well and I'm interested in everybody's dream, looking forward to seeing the other residents dreams. It's very apt that Irene is the one calling the meeting, being like the town matriach and I didn't think it was confusing at all, it's really different and I'm interested to see how you join it all together and what people do now they know their future! Looking forward to the next update
  21. In reality Rachel probably wouldn't even be able to treat Kirsty being her friend and she wasn't even on shift. Sometimes things have to be manipulated for the sake of a storyline and Rachel HAD to be the character to tell Leah about them losing the baby so that Leah didn't walk into their room and so we could see her struggling with the guilt that she thought she was to blame...it wouldn't have worked if Miles had told her. Let's be honest, NONE of the characters with professions EVER act within their professional boundaries because they are main character before they are the token "doctor" or "police officer" and how sick would we get if we kept hearing them say "I'm sorry I can't say" Broken patient confidentiality aside I did think it was a lovely scene, seeing Rachel a new Mum struggling to be professional yet be clearly upset about the loss of Kirsty's baby. It added a new dimension and I think you can only comprehend the pain over losing a child when you have one yourself. I am soooo glad to see Rachel back to normal, laughing, joking, and seeing her really happy with her family and in her relationship with Tony. Apart from a few moments here and there we haven't actually seen her enjoying her family yet and so I'm hoping we will for the next couple of weeks at least (before the next drama hits, whatever it is.) Tachel have had an amazingly rocky year and I'm so pleased they've come through it stronger (I think) than before. When you think what little storylines they had last year and just how much they've been through this year it's amazing! I agree with you Karen though that I'd have liked to see her working through her post natal depression but I guess we can't have everything! I'm very grateful for the storylines we have had this year and it's not over yet
  22. Yaaaaaay you updated Wow there's so much to comment on. Firstly, I wanted to say how beautiful and sensitively you've written Martha's grief and self harming, it's heartbreaking to see her get the courage to talk to somebody about it and open up how she felt about her life and Rachel didn't notice what she said because of her own anxieties and struggles At first I thought I'd be annoyed with Rachel for not noticing Martha's pain but the way you wrote it allowed me to empathise with both characters in totally different ways, Rachel's so desperate to be a good Mum and get Grace settled, I'm glad she appeared to be doing that by the end of the chapter. I really hope someone saves Martha in time though, i hope its not too late! Tony was the amazing father it's so sweet, I can imagine him with a daughter I loved how you described his feelings of wanting to come home to be with his 'girls' and how he rushed to see Grace after giving Rachel a cuddle. It was just nice to have that little happy, family scene in amongst all the other grief and anger going on with the other characters. Leah! Saucy minx!! I'm not feeling the Hugo love from her and I actually quite like the thought of her and Brad, I'm glad he wasn't happy with the whole betrayal thing and I hope she'll make a choice soon. I'd like to see some scenes between Brad and Rachel with Grace, I do miss the sibling relationship they had on the show. Amazing update, please update again soon I love this fic
  23. Tony may have raised two sons, but I think it's fair to say he's a bit out of practice. It will take a while for him to get back into the swing of things, you can't expect him to be superdad because he's been a father of two. Also having a newborn is a stressful time, so it doesn't matter how experienced you are with something like that you're bound to have your good and bad times with caring for a newborn. Of course I totally agree with you. I'm not expecting him to be perfect (although he practically is with Harry) and I imagine some days will be a struggle but he's only dealing with it 2 days a week whereas Rachel's dealing with it 5 days a week so all I was trying to say is that it will be silly
  24. Wohoo you updated early Hehe it was a really funny chapter, loved the whole Tony being passed out and drunken antics! And I'm so glad she said yes to the proposal, I liked how you built up the tension and had everyone willing her on to say yes. Poor Brendan I hope he's ok!
  25. Wow that all sounds so exciting! Thank you for posting, one update a day sounds good to me I'm rubbish with trying to figure out clues so I won't even try and guess but will just enjoy it as it all unravels. Really looking forward to hearing Rachel's response to the proposal and Rachel vs Jack in who makes the best breakfast sounds funny Rachel's got a bad reputation for cooking in the show hehe. Gina becoming the new Irene sounds interesting as does Tony as prime minister? Really looking forward to the next update!
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