JosieTash

LOOOOVED that !!!! Cooooool that Nicole and Roman are in this now .......adn that whole thing about Alf and the growth liquid !!! and especially this ........ Leah then catches a loud wailing sobbing crying VJ in her arms. Leah then silently curses at herself for even asking the question. She was planning on watching TV soon If VJ wasn’t going to stop crying she was going to have to cancel Irene she was coming over for a girly movie night.

Was cooooooooooooool that Casey convinced Dex to start living again !!!! Soooooo many great moments in this chapter, like ....... They will find a way to keep moving forward, he knows they will. But Dex’s family shouldn’t have to. “I’m not in the mood for putting on pants most days and yet here we are,” Casey counters. “See, I’m not as dumb as people think I am. And you aren’t as dead as you think you are.” “Hang on,” Dex says, and he turns back into his room. He quickly goes over to his bookshelf and straightens his action figures, making sure they are perfectly aligned.

VERY cooool chapter. ESPECIALLY loved this ...... Nina was the girl for him she had always been the one Jett knew this to be true or thought he did. No other girl had ever come close to being even in the same league of hotness to Nina’s beauty that was until the ghostly, memorising captivating sight of Darcy came into view. The graceful way she walked into the room with her black flowing leather jacket lightly brushing upon Jett’s X Men carpet. The way her eyelashes fluttered as she smiled. The way she seated herself within the folds of Jett’s bed sheet as she sat down just to the side of him gazing at him. The deep pools of her eyes had the slight hint of mischief to them and sparkle of sexiness that sent shivers of excitement throughout the whole of Jett’s body even that of his broken leg. Then she spoke the voice of a utter angel.

Further to what Red Ranger 1 said, I know that I only very occaionally devaite, based on feedback, from my [pre-scripted or otherwise] plan for my fics. I also know that, as I'd befreinded a number of people on this site before i posted my 1st fic here, that there would be a soft landing [as it were] for my work .....with the bonus or others [unknown to me] who liked what i wrote as well. It's also handy, and VERY apprecaited, thate ther are several people who always comment on my fics.

OUTSTANDING chapter .....full of great emotions and use of language !!!! Especailly loved ..... And as three siblings, Sasha always thought nothing would break them; a three-chord strand that’s perfectly in tune or a tripod that could stand firm on anything. Now, she’s not so sure. “If I could do that stuff on the list then I – I wouldn’t be that sick kid anymore. But this isn’t going away, is it?” “You know those moments when you actually worry about the future of humanity? I had a student come up to me today and ask whether you could have a set of identical twins that wasn’t two boys or two girls. Like, she genuinely wanted to know if you could have a boy and girl and be identical twins. All I kept thinking was, you are studying to be a doctor, and you could be operating on someone’s brain one day. That worries me, and you aren’t really listening to me, are you?” “Seriously, stop,” April says, much more angrily than she intended. She steps out of her sister’s grasp and Bianca looks a little stunned. “Sorry. I’m just – this isn’t a big deal. I don’t want it to be a big deal.” Bianca holds up her hands in surrender. “Okay, not a big deal.” "Thank you.” She isn’t used to this: being social. Being around people who don’t know her every intimate detail. They don’t know Dex, their history, or how she copes when everything becomes too much. People come up to her, guys and girls she recognizes vaguely from some of her classes, and ask her how she’s going, just because that’s what you do at a party, not because you have some hidden agenda.

LOVE Darcy as a Goth !!!!! ...... pierced lip and all !!!! ........ thoughts of Edward Gunglass !!! Looking forward to the next chapter ....looks like a love traingle leads to the whole current VJ sitch !!!!

Sooooooooooo cooooooooooooooooooooool !!!! LOVED Leah's line about Nate's great diagnosis ..................adn her saving him from VJ with the cattle prod !!!

That last chapter [and this WHOLE fic] was CRAZY COOOOOOOOL !!!!!!! LOOOOVED the tractor net [soooooooooooooooo Dex] adn the whole Esteher Anderosn supermodel pog thing was GREAT !!!!!!! MANY thanks for sharing this fic with us !!!!

AWESOME, Jen !!!! Sasha was rigt when she said they are going to GROUNDED FOR LIFE over what happned to Dex on the beach ............it's funny though, the skinny dipping bit - especailly since Sasha has, of course, done he whole naked swimming thing on the show. Also loved ........ And it’s not lying if he is going to tell her eventually. There’s silence and Dex wants to be able to explain. He wants the words to come so that he can tell April that it didn’t mean anything, she was just a hook up, and possibly only happened because Dex’s brain was being eaten from the inside, but nothing comes out. “A boat that has awesome taste in beanies.” Re Rosie adn the whole through the wringer thing, a crisis and the like is soooo much better for drama and everything [rather than all lovey dovey stuff] Oh, and on same subject, I paralysed Sasha in my previous fic [that continues in my current story] !!!

Re the most recent 2 chapters ....... LOOOVED sexy Hannah !!! ....and funny bout THAT calendar!!! Yaaaaaaaaay !!! I was RIGHT!!! VJ is the monster!!!! V funny !!!!!!

This fic is soooooooooooooooooooo words BEAUTIFUL !!!! I especially LOVED ...... “It’s clearly not nothing,” April insists, “Something’s got you in a mood. You were fine before.” “I was a lot of things before.” “Dex. You’ve got nothing to worry about. Cameron was saying that he’s seen a lot of cancer patients who –” “Well, if Cameron says it, it must be true,” Dex pouts with a roll of his eyes. “Seriously, Dex. What’s the matter?” “You mean apart from my own body turning against me and growing mutant cells inside my head?” “What are you doing here?” Indi asks in lieu of an actual greeting. “Hi Dex, I’m so glad you’re here, visiting me and work. I miss hanging out with you and my sense of humour is nowhere near as sharp as yours,” Dex replies with a roll of his eyes. “One, you hate exercise,” Indi points out. “Two, this is a girl’s class, and three, are you sure you’re up to it? I don’t want to have to pick up your lazy butt off the sand.” Dex grins, “I don’t mind sharing with the ladies.” He glances down at the beach where the girls have started to arrive. They’re all around Indi’s age, in varying degrees of undress. Some are in crop tops, others in extremely short shorts, all showing a generous amount of skin. AND the reference to Rosie [whom I’m adore – but am “putting through the wringer” in my latest fic] was cute too !!!!!

Sophie & Brax is cute ......given the 2 actors playing them's real life connection !!! AND another reference to Leah's derriere !!! enjoying this fic !!!!!

This is GREAT !!!!!! Cooooool refernce to the Ninja Turtles AND loved Sophies'comment about Leah's behind !!!!! I'm wondering if VJ, in this strory, is only occasionally human ........and the Leah is feeding VJ's real form - a monster of some kind !!!! just a theory !!!

That was sooooooooooooo cooooool !!!!! LOVED Hannah & Andy's bedroom antics !!! .....and Alf channeling the T1000 from T2 ......and the amnesia thing with Emerson !!!! BEYOND terrific !!!!!