JosieTash

Looks like Maddy’s about to run again. Coooool that the abortion doctor helped her out. Loved these especially ...... Roo and her mother both wanted to turn her into something she wasn’t.And then there was the baby.She wasn’t sure when it happened, when she’d stopped being scared of the idea of motherhood, when the baby had stopped being a link to Josh or a problem with Oscar and become a person in its own right, but she had an overwhelming urge to be everything to this baby that her mother wasn’t to her, someone the child could rely on.And that started at that moment.She was going to be the person she wanted to be and the mother her child needed. Maddy didn’t answer.She’d learnt a long time ago there was no point saying anything.

Good to see that Maddy went home [or more to the point that she isn’t on the streets]. Not surprised that her mum wants her to have an abortion !!! REALLY looking fwd to see where this goes.

Maddy running away is ironic .......... and from the sound of the premise, i'm guessing this move won't turn out well. Loved this ....... “I’m sorry to be such a burden.”Maddy’s tone was sarcastic, so much so that Roo didn’t realise she was only half-joking. I'm not really a fan of Maddy, but am VERY intersted where you take this !!!!!

This has been a FANTASTIC fic !!!!! Great take on what's going on with the re casting of VJ ..... .......but did you HAVE to kill Sasha ??? .................[in my mind though, Sash goes all Jedi and kills the "Rancor Monster" ......hehehehe]

Intriguing premise ………will be interesting to see where this goes !!! LOVED this …………… Oscar stared hard at her for a few moment.“Are my evil twin and the boyfriend in there?” Maddy shifted awkwardly, embarrassed at how easily read she was.“That’s got nothing to do with it.” “Look, come on.I’ll sit with you, we can even make jokes about how sickening they are.” Maddy glared at him stubbornly.The last thing she needed was Oscar treating her like a charity case and taking away what little dignity she had left after being dumped, cheated on, used and impregnated… possibly not in that order.“I don’t want to.”

Looooooooove that Alf's responsible for VJ going all [kinda] Incredible Hulk !!!!!!!

That was coooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooool !!!! I especaily liked that the wheelchair being too big saved Jett from you know where ............. and this ,,,,,,, The fact that he planned to study the female form of his school principal never came into question from anyone. bonus of another reference/mention of Leah's butt !!!!

VJ having the hots for Sophie .........nice touch, given how muhc he's aged !!!! LOOOOVE it !!!!! Coooool way to include Nieve !!!!!!!

VERY very AWESOME take on VJ's sitch !!!!! his dream was funny too !!!!!!!

That was, in a good way, INSANE !!!!! Casey, the energy drink, Denny, the shark, the VJ/Darcy/Jett love tri !!!! EVERYTHING !!!

Coooooooool chapter !!!!! LOVED the Neighbours webisodes tie in !!!!! ........ AND Roman's musings on what happens to people post skinny dipping ..... AND the references to Ricky's VERY FINE assets !!!!!

Jen, your fics are always soooooooo AWESOME !!!! Your use of langauge is .......I completely totally admire it !!!! In this final chapter of your lastest, i especially liked ........ - the way you inclde the title in a comment that April made - “If you two could hold your make-up sex until you get home, my stomach and leather interiors would appreciate it,” Casey calls from the front, eyes flicking up and watching them for a second in the mirror. and i especailly ESPECIALLY liked ....... But even when words would completely slip his mind April knew what he wanted to say. When they were together it always felt like they were connected in some way that was beyond verbal communication. She remembers talking about everything with Dex. Her greatest fears and dreams; their own firsts and lasts. They’d fall asleep together on top of the covers after whispering late into the night, with nothing but a sliver of moonlight illuminating the room. It would always end with them lying side by side, staring up at the ceiling, when the words had run out and nothing but their breaths in perfect synchronicity. But she didn’t need to see or hear Dex to know he was still there. Many MANY thanks for sharing this fic with us !!!!!!!!!