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Aw. It was so lovely at the start how he was caring for her, & his chat with Gina was beautiful. I was so hoping they'd get back together, but I completely understand Rachel, though. It must be so hard for her, it seems to her as if Tony's come back in pity, almost. I hope she realises soon that he's genuine. He better be. I couldn't stop reading, like crazylazy, haha. I didn't want it to end! Then again, I never want your chapters to end. I loved the mentions of Gina and Tony's childhood, and how Rachel's leukaemia somewhat mirrors their Mother's. I loved this bit: I'm SO intrigued to know what his secret is, especially now that we know it's not dissimilar to what her Dad did! & ! Something goes wrong with the chemo? Can't wait to read about it! Brilliant chapter, I LOVED it. Cant wait for you to update soon. xx

Oh my goodness, that was beautiful. I loved Leah's "chat" with Tony. The way she fired up at him, it was so Leah. It was beautiful. Ah, Tony knows. The way Rach broke down as soon as she saw Tony was heartbreaking. And he was crying too. The way she just let him hold her was beautiful, I loved it. Loved the chapter, it was amazing! Looking forward to seeing what happens with Gina, and what Rachel says, too. Update soon. x

Oh wow, what a brilliant chapter; well worth the wait! Rachel. I feel so sorry for her. She feels so trapped, Mark has such a hold on her. You're portraying it brilliantly! I feel sorry for Tony, too. His chat with Leah was one of my favourite parts of the chapter. I liked how, once he'd blurted out about him & Rachel, that he felt embarrassed. I hope they do something to convince Rach to leave Mark... just so long as Tony's sobered up by then! Go Charlie! It's great that she's supporting Rachel too. Can't say the same for Angelo... Great update!

Ah, this fic is amazing. I've been reading, just never gotten around to commenting... until now. Rachel! Being abused by Mark... But I love how supportive Tony & Leah are, and how they hooked onto it. She's such a good friend. Ah, Tony & Rachel. He's such a gentlemen, and so gentle & supportive. Such a difference from Mark. And Emily, I feel so sorry for her. With her cancer, and having to tell the one she loves most that she's dying. It must be so hard. Plus, worrying about Rachel... I'll give a more in-depth post soon. Please update soon!

Ah, just caught up on the last few chapters: WOW! So much has happened, it's amazing. Kate = How dare she hold Harry like that, calling him Jack, and acting like she was his Mum... she has a few issues, me thinks. I loved Tony defending Rach, even though I'm still not happy with him. I loved how Harry calmed down as soon as Rach held him... aww. Now, onto the most recent chapter... My goodness, that was absolutely beautiful. You wrote it so well, so sensitively, it was amazing. I loved how Leah was so supportive, and the way she brought Martha in was a lovely touch. It made me like Martha a lot, too! I loved their fooling around, cheering Rach up... it was so beautiful. And such a realistic portrayal of friendship, but also Rach's hard times. It was just... beautiful. This was just one of the MANY things that stood out to me in the last few chapters... And of COURSE the last chapter with the girls, messing around and having fun. Gorgeous. I loved, loved, loved it. Can't wait to see Tony's reaction to Rach's Leukaemia... Update soon.

! Oh. My. Gosh. That is so hearbreaking. Poor Rachel, I just feel so sorry for her. Your writing was SO realistic, I thought I was there, like I was watching it. Amazing. I was actually thinking of what you'd write, and if you'd make it so Rachel felt numb about it, and if she'd not want Tony to know or not. You're a really great writer. Seriously, I have no other words other than it was amazing. And really realistic. And hearbreaking. Oh, & thanks. I did my research and that's what came up. Ah, I'm going to go back and read it again. It's so good.

I've been reading this, but just haven't gotten around to commenting. WOW! This is amazing. And really emotional. I feel so sorry for Rachel, what Tony is doing is cruel. And she sounds really sick... it sounds a lot like Anaemia, I think it's called Aplastic Anaemia... hmmm. Or even Leukemia, but I doubt it'd be THAT serious. Still, I can't wait to see what it is. Gah, Tonnnnnnny! I guess he's being cruel to be kind, but it's still so sad. I can't wait for you to update! This is so good.

http://au.tv.yahoo.com/home-and-away/galle...-november-2009/ ! They've been so, so cute lately. <33

Congrats, Barbara! Wow, 100 pages; that's so awesome. Well done. Your work's amazing! Could I request: - Rachel/Amy - Tachel - Tachel&Harry Thankyou so much, & again, congrats! I must come in here more often, & actually comment when I do. Haha. Oh, & great idea, btw! I'm going to go through your thread again and come back and comment. I come in here, but I just never comment.. so, that's exactly what I'm going to do!

I thought that's what you wanted...? I guess you're right, but I think it shows her vulnerability.

I LOVED the trawler scene. Oh. my. goodness. It didn't click with me that that was an Gaden scene until I came on here afterwards. And then I realised. Haha, I was so silly. Anyway, it was GORGEOUS. Haha, I loved it with Geoff trying to wake him up, and then afterwards when Aden was wrapped in the towel and they were kidding around. Ooooh; 'Geoff & Aden, sitting on a boat, K-I-S-S-I-N-G.' Haha. [PS; I think the irony is, when I wrote 'kidding,' I actually typed 'kissing' the first time. Hahahaha. ] Oh, and for anyone who hasn't seen, on the Official Site, there is the CUTEST photo of Aden and Geoff. You'll see. ;)

Loving this fic, Charlene! It's great. I love the Tachel&Harry interactions; so cute. Really hoping you continue! Can't wait for more. (:

^ You do? Luckyy! ;p Kirsty, the suspense is killing me! And probably the rest of us, too!

Hey Kirsty! Okay, so, I've been reading this fic almost religiously, I just haven't commented. And now I am, haha. Anyway... I think this fiction is incredible! So well written; you have a writing gift. Love Tachel, and love this fic! Best of both worlds, haha. The Jimmy thing was so unexpected! Mind you, so was the Kim stuff, as well. Ah, Kachel. This fic describes the emotion, feelings and cute little moments perfectly. The wedding was beautiful; just perfect! And the honeymoon and everything; all the cute little moments were gorgeous! Haha, the sex talk between Rach&Leah was hilarious, too! Please update soon!

Chill, we were just saying. That's how WE perceive Rachel. Can't we just agree to disagree?

Oh god! I hate that show.... Too much drama, so many hook ups, someone is always kisses another guy/girl, sleeping with an ex. It's too much!! Yeah, well, it (sometimes) sounds like H&A. And a few characters in particular. Hmm.

'That's what happens in soapie land...' Haha, yeah, that's true. H&A better watch out, it might turn into Bold and the Beautiful.

I like her colour, it's different, but nice. And the length is great! It suits her, I think. Anyway, Belle's always been so fiery and headstrong, even if, sometimes, it lands her in hot water. She's good, but I really think the writers need to leave her alone for now, and maybe, for her departure, have a nice exit storyline or something. Knowing H&A though, that won't happen. I'm sure whatever happens, Jess will do it justice. I think the writers are starting to milk every last drop out of this rehab/drugs storyline. She's been "cured" all in the space of a few weeks, and now she's embarking on yet another relationship. Enough is enough, really. But hey, that's my opinion.

I prefer Aden and Belle as friends. I'm not really fussed by their relationship; it doesn't bother me either way. I think him and Nicole were good, but that's a different thread. Aden and Belle are almost too similar for each other, maybe (IMO) that's why I'm not really fussed. They can be great one day, and really poor the next. Don't get me wrong, the actors, Jess and Todd, are fantastic, it's just the characters that I'm soso about.

Happy Birthday Amy!! .x

Wow. Just wow. That was incredible! Amazingly written and you pin pointed every action and emotion! Well done! You're so brave to write something and then tell people something so personal; be proud!! xx

August Rush One of the best movies I've seen! Definitely recommend it! xo

^ Is that Kath, Rosey? Anyway, I'm at home, looking at my book, forcing myself to read it. Stupid school novel study!! Lord of the Flies. It's so confusing, and very... different. But good. How's everyone else? xo

Lol, awesome! xo