Melbelle94

Great Chapter! I have this theory about April and her pregnancy, but I don't how to the spoiler thing people do when they have a theory about something that is really frustrating because I want to tell you. Suppose I will keep it to myself! Anyways, loved it as always!

I like the name Caden! Emmi is adorable Update soon

Awesome Chapter Danni! Loved the chat between Charlie and Ruby. I would love for April to have a girl but I would laugh if it was another boy. A little twist for them.

Danni, an amazing job as always. Your updates brighten my day. Poor Rubes, I kinda get why she did it. Evan just kept pushing the subject. Little Finn spoiled the secret. Uh oh. I think April is a little stressed out about the possibility of another baby. I hate to say it but I just can't seem to like James. He's just screwed up to many times. I hope he sees that April is worried about another baby. I wonder how Finn will feel about another sibling after everything he went through with Leo in the last few chapters. Great job, Danni!

Being married and having a child I kind of hope April doesn't just forgive James. What he did has jeopardized their whole family. & I would be even more furious that he left. You NEVER just leave in the middle of something that big. Even though Xavier has taken the money I think April should tell Finn the truth, I am not saying invite him into Finn's life because his ISN'T proving father material but more so because if she doesn't Finn will find out one day and hate her for it. Secrets like that never stay secret. Anyways. Brax shouldn't have missed that appointed!!! God Brax! Update soon!

Loved this chapter! Update soon please!

Great start!

The note has backfired! Update soon please!

Hi, I just read the who thing so here I go. Chapter 1 - Interesting start. Chapter 2 - Casey is with Tamara. Yet thinking about Sasha. Complication. Chapter 3 - Tamara broke Kyle's arm - Bitch! What is Celeste up too? Chapter 4 - Xavier punched Kyle? What is he a punching bag? Wonder what he will do to Casey. Chapter 5 - Sasha and Tamara egging Xavier's house. Lol. Chapter 6 - Brax's daughter. Oh god. This could complicate thigs. Chapter 7 - Celeste living with the Braxton's. Interesting. Chapter 8 - Tam and Case ending on good terms. Great! Chapter 9 - Bye Bye Xavier. Chapter 10 - Great Chapter. Chapter 11 - Celeste working at Angelo's now. Chapter 12 - Glad Brax is considering custody and looking after his daughter. Chapter 13 - Twist. Hopefull bad history doesn't reoccur. Chapter 14 - Glad Kyle regrets his actions. Well is starting to express. Chapter 15 - Good chapter. Chapter 16 - What happened at the end? Chapter 17 - Who drugged Kyle? Chapter 18 - How does this fit into the present. Eager to find out. Chapter 19 - Surprise visit. Chapter 20 - Good chapter. Chapter 21 - Glad a restraining order is in place. Chapter 22 - Whoa. What going on at the end? Great story. Update soon please. Sorry such short reviews. My kid is crying! Update soon! x

Ugh. I'm so torn. I hope Hanna isn't Brax's because that way he would have a right to be angry at Charlie for not trusting him. But a part of me is hoping because you see this scenario in many fanfics and it always ends up the same way. Brax isn't the father. But I hate the idea that Charlie would be right about not trusting him. I am however glad that Ruby is backing him up. If she can trust is Brax then surely Charlie should trust her husband. I know its a lot to ask but she should have some faith after all she did marry him, she loves him. I also am curious as to what Nina dreams about. And while I understand why Charlie would be feeling angry at Nina. I do feel that she shouldn't be as rude. Ugh its so hard. I LOVE Chax. But I can't help but feel for this other woman. Your story is sooo good! Update soon please

Aww. Loved how all the kids had a great Christmas! So cute Kaya giving Heath is present. & Heath proposing yay!. Laughed at Finn and his undypants hehehe. Great job. I literally wait for you updates everyday. Update soon please! X

How cute are Heath and Kaya! Update soon?! Please x

So I have a couple of chapters to review for: Uh. Glad Charlie and Brax talked. They needed to clear the air. Poor Leo. Getting sick. I must admit I am still angry at Jay for leaving him but I can see why he was scared. Poor Eli must have had a rough life and its not going to help when he's shifted from Charlie and Brax's home. Foster care can be hard especially on little kids who don't fully understand. Kaya and Heath. Daddy daughter dance is adorable. The little girl is hilarious. Liked Charlie and Ruby's talk but Ruby needs to talk to Evan. Must say Kobe is a cutie throughout the story. And while I love reading about Charlie and Brax my second favourite is definitely Heath and Bianca with little Kaya. I love her little moments with Heath. And you update so regularly. Okay. I will stop rambling now. Update soon!

I love this FanFic you do an excellent job. Finn is so cute. I absolutely adore him. I hope he remains excited about baby Leo and doesn't get jealous as most kids do. Kaya is adorable and clearly loves Heath. I would love to see more of the Bianca/Heath/Kaya dynamic. Charlie - I get the impression she doesn't want to have another child. Not a biological one. She feels obligated which I don't think is a good reason to have a child as she might resent the baby. But the storyline suits. I really hope she comes round. Ruby and Evan are a good couple. Seriously I wait for your updates every day but with a child sometimes I miss and only get to read every second day. Uh! Withdrawal! Ahaha. Update Soon!

Alright, I need help. If your reading my story Fixable then you'd be ideal. At the moment I am skipping through the years just skimming over important events to get to the present. Do you think I should keep doing that, before morning onto the present were Brax and Heath with come face to face, where a situation will have to unite them or destroy them forever. Or should I work on the past in detail? Thankyou!