Red Ranger 1 Posted December 20, 2017 Report Share Posted December 20, 2017 I was slightly worried about Phoebe being back but she seems to fit in well with the family and I liked her increasing bewilderment that Brax is in China China.(As opposed to a Wedgwood factory, I guess?)So looks like the authorities aren't going to do anything about Brax's message.Going to China and banging on doors is looking more and more like the best option... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ludub Posted December 20, 2017 Author Report Share Posted December 20, 2017 8 hours ago, Red Ranger 1 said: I liked her increasing bewilderment that Brax is in China China. It's always the last place you look, isn't it? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pembie Posted December 20, 2017 Report Share Posted December 20, 2017 Soooooo Phoebe's going to be touring what in China, China you mean like The China? Is she going to come across Brax? Its a very big place as she keeps pointing out Is Brax like Phoebe's number one fan? Does he know she's the one singing Is Brax a fan of Anime Like so many questoins This whole thing could turn out to be like a huge game of chinese whispers and Cameron's just been given the wrong kind of whisper? How very dare Dax own a minion towel and I don't shocking I sooo want one now. But hey ho this story can act as as a public service as I go and add minion towel to my Christmas list. Oh and clothes of blues and yellows if only I could get a clothesline like that That little boy has taste. Playing other people's games for Chocolate though well I guess when means must. Thank you for my Christmas present of a new chapter of this I still enjoy your releases of it very much Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ludub Posted December 20, 2017 Author Report Share Posted December 20, 2017 2 hours ago, pembie said: How very dare Dax own a minion towel and I don't shocking I sooo want one now Haha! I thought you might Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pembie Posted December 20, 2017 Report Share Posted December 20, 2017 14 minutes ago, Ludub said: Haha! I thought you might I would also be happy with a spongebob one his bright yellow too Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted December 22, 2017 Report Share Posted December 22, 2017 Great chapter Wow I didn't except Phoebe back so soon. Did Brax get transferred? Oh Cameron what have you done? Update again soon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ludub Posted December 22, 2017 Author Report Share Posted December 22, 2017 21 minutes ago, Kristen said: Wow I didn't except Phoebe back so soon. Neither did Kyle! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Inactive User Posted December 23, 2017 Report Share Posted December 23, 2017 Great chapter Liked how you brought Phoebe back into this fanfiction Looking forwards to the next chapter Xxx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Suzza101 Posted December 29, 2017 Report Share Posted December 29, 2017 Great chapter. I’m surprised that Pheobe is back so soon and loved Kyle’s reaction to her being back. I really hope that they do find Brax and bring him home do that he can be with his family. Looking forward to the next chapter. Please update soon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bijou Posted January 1, 2018 Report Share Posted January 1, 2018 Sorry it's taken me this long to fully catch up I will agree with another comment it's hard to picture Brax looking old I'll always picture Brax as river boys leader I think that's ore to do with the writers of the show though ss character would get older it's never reference (Vj aside) never been a fan of Phoebe which by now I'm sure you know so I'm not too thrilled that she's back I don't think she'll ever grow out of interfering in other people's lives it's like a force of habit for her don't get me wrong I'm not trying to tell you how to write your story just speaking honestly my favourite characters of the story are Cameron and Anna (especially Anna) as usual love your work Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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